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I wept when I first seen your mother in wedding lace.
I cried as I unveiled her angel face.
I wept when the night she said yes I will marry you
I cried on top of alter as I heard her say I do.
I wept when she said we are having a baby.
I cried when I thought of the name daddy.
I wept when I seen that pink lace.
I cried as I unveiled that angel face.
I wept the very first time you got ill.
I cried when you took your first spill
I wept that very first prom night.
I cried because I knew he was your white knight.
I wept because I knew I wasn’t the only man anymore
I cried because soon you would be walking through that door.
I sit here weeping …..
As I see you in that wedding lace.
I cry as he unveils that angel face.
I weep this night because he is marrying you.
I cry as the past echo’s the very same words...I do.
I sit here as a grin appears..
I grin in anticipation for that first glance of that pink lace….
I smile the day I unveil that angel face.
I grin when I first think of seeing that baby.
I smile at the thought of grand daddy………
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Full Circle

Contributed by recyclebin on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 01:57:19 AM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty



I sit here in a daze….
I wept when I first seen your mother in wedding lace.
I cried as I unveiled her angel face.
I wept when the night she said yes I will marry you
I cried on top of alter as I heard her say I do.
I wept when she said we are having a baby.
I cried when I thought of the name daddy.
I wept when I seen that pink lace.
I cried as I unveiled that angel face.
I wept the very first time you got ill.
I cried when you took your first spill
I wept that very first prom night.
I cried because I knew he was your white knight.
I wept because I knew I wasn’t the only man anymore
I cried because soon you would be walking through that door.
I sit here weeping …..
As I see you in that wedding lace.
I cry as he unveils that angel face.
I weep this night because he is marrying you.
I cry as the past echo’s the very same words...I do.
I sit here as a grin appears..
I grin in anticipation for that first glance of that pink lace….
I smile the day I unveil that angel face.
I grin when I first think of seeing that baby.
I smile at the thought of grand daddy………




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Re: Full Circle (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 08:05:25 AM AEST
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a very touching, compassionate write. the ending made me smile. i loved the structure, it worked brilliantly.

-phil


Re: Full Circle (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 12:29:02 PM AEST
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the circle, a universal sign of harmony.
spendid rendering of the loveliness of
human relation from a gentlemans' point of view.
peace. elle


Re: Full Circle (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 07:49:30 PM AEST
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Well, well, well, congrats Grand Daddy!!!

A very nice & endearing poem.

Take care and thank you for sharing your joy with the rest of us.

Tim


Re: Full Circle (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 09:07:45 PM AEST
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And I almost wept at the sheer delight and beauty in this write. You captured everything perfect and beautiful in a world so hard right now. Bringing hope and love to each who reads it. Concrats grand dad! How wonderful.

Hugs
Michelle




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