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Array ( [sid] => 147604 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => sitting in the darkness [time] => 2009-01-24 20:53:54 [hometext] => [bodytext] => she sits in the darkness pondering on a thought...
...'what did i do to deserve this?'
...'why me?'
what did she do to deserve a life of pain and torture
she touches the scar on her face and visions of that horible night come flooding back
why was he so cruel
why did he torture her so
it was unfair all she ever wanted was to be loved
but it would never happen
this was the end
she could no longer withstand the pain and agony
she grabs the rusty blade beside her and raises it to her throat
one slice and its all over
blood all on the floor
a dead young girl silently lays there
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sitting in the darkness

Contributed by maggot on Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 08:53:54 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

she sits in the darkness pondering on a thought...
...'what did i do to deserve this?'
...'why me?'
what did she do to deserve a life of pain and torture
she touches the scar on her face and visions of that horible night come flooding back
why was he so cruel
why did he torture her so
it was unfair all she ever wanted was to be loved
but it would never happen
this was the end
she could no longer withstand the pain and agony
she grabs the rusty blade beside her and raises it to her throat
one slice and its all over
blood all on the floor
a dead young girl silently lays there

Copyright © maggot ... [ 2009-01-24 20:53:54]
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Re: sitting in the darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by classicfailedhero on Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 09:38:34 PM AEST
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a powerful read- cheers

Re: sitting in the darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 08:36:19 AM AEST
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very powerful and succinct.

-phil

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