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Array ( [sid] => 1476 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Save Me [time] => 2002-07-31 06:28:56 [hometext] => sometimes we go through times in our lives, where only God can save us. [bodytext] => a vacancy overlooked
desperately longing for Your touch.
a smile to hide the pain
this has all become too much.

a shudder, a wince
creeps on me in my truth.
a quiet cry escapes my mouth,
as time ticks by
so does my youth.

creating a bed of thorns to lie in
i ask myself why.
when my own sharp points punch right through me,
its something i can't deny.

too tired to speak
too angry to hear
too afraid to move
i'm stuck in fear.

my cry becomes Your call
speaking of refuge, grace and peace
and once again with my head held low,
You save me. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 295 [topic] => 11 [informant] => midnightsky [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

You Save Me

Contributed by midnightsky on Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 06:28:56 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

a vacancy overlooked
desperately longing for Your touch.
a smile to hide the pain
this has all become too much.

a shudder, a wince
creeps on me in my truth.
a quiet cry escapes my mouth,
as time ticks by
so does my youth.

creating a bed of thorns to lie in
i ask myself why.
when my own sharp points punch right through me,
its something i can't deny.

too tired to speak
too angry to hear
too afraid to move
i'm stuck in fear.

my cry becomes Your call
speaking of refuge, grace and peace
and once again with my head held low,
You save me.

Copyright © midnightsky ... [ 2002-07-31 06:28:56]
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Re: You Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 06:53:15 AM AEST
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The sheer beauty of this has made me tearful. I can't praise it enough. Welcome to YPDC. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
Chrissie

Re: You Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Brooke on Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 10:01:33 AM AEST
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This poem was so powerful, I had tears in my eyes. I to have had experiences like that. I also welcome you to YPDC, I am also new here and I hope you enjoy it as much as I have, and I hope I read more from you! This was a truely touching piece.

Brooke

Re: You Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 11:50:35 AM AEST
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A very touching and heartfelt poem. It couldn't come at a better time for me...... Thank you for sharing it.....Hope you like it here..
Jenni

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