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Array ( [sid] => 147515 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let This Be A Love Story [time] => 2009-01-19 20:18:36 [hometext] => Life can be viewed many ways... [bodytext] => Just like a flower
We go through stages
And like a book
We have many pages

So lets make history
Write a classic
I'll even let you choose
The topic of your pick

So what is our story about
You tell me
Just let us never fade
Into eternity

If you ever left me
I would be so lost
I would fight for you to get you back
No matter the cost

So please just don't hate who I am
Give me a rose and start our plan
Let's write history for everyone to see
Because I know we can

I want you near
Not so far away
So come here for awhile
And stay

Take a hold of me
Hold me close and tenderly
Never set me free
Let me be your secret key

For I give you my heart and soul
And would die for you in the blink of an eye
You are my world and without you
I would wither and die

I want you more and more
Each and every day
So lets do this
What do you say?

Let this be our love story
Flower and book
One that no one
Can ever overlook
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Let This Be A Love Story

Contributed by butterflyperfect on Monday, 19th January 2009 @ 08:18:36 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Just like a flower
We go through stages
And like a book
We have many pages

So lets make history
Write a classic
I'll even let you choose
The topic of your pick

So what is our story about
You tell me
Just let us never fade
Into eternity

If you ever left me
I would be so lost
I would fight for you to get you back
No matter the cost

So please just don't hate who I am
Give me a rose and start our plan
Let's write history for everyone to see
Because I know we can

I want you near
Not so far away
So come here for awhile
And stay

Take a hold of me
Hold me close and tenderly
Never set me free
Let me be your secret key

For I give you my heart and soul
And would die for you in the blink of an eye
You are my world and without you
I would wither and die

I want you more and more
Each and every day
So lets do this
What do you say?

Let this be our love story
Flower and book
One that no one
Can ever overlook

Copyright © butterflyperfect ... [ 2009-01-19 20:18:36]
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Re: Let This Be A Love Story (User Rating: 1 )
by kaylakristine on Monday, 19th January 2009 @ 09:24:46 PM AEST
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wow! i really like this its very clever

Re: Let This Be A Love Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th January 2009 @ 11:04:59 PM AEST
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awesome, i also really like it very much....
Cheers

Re: Let This Be A Love Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th January 2009 @ 07:03:15 AM AEST
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very nice indeed. it is reminiscent of my style orf writing i think, but you are more direct in your communication, which makes this punchier than my writes. very good.

-phil

Re: Let This Be A Love Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy on Tuesday, 20th January 2009 @ 07:07:21 AM AEST
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that was so beautiful....i loved it so much and iam speechless at this moment...great write!!

Puppy :)

Re: Let This Be A Love Story (User Rating: 1 )
by gmcse8 on Tuesday, 20th January 2009 @ 10:34:09 AM AEST
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I very much enjoyed your poem. The metaphor of life being a flower or book was really nice. The first and last stanzas were the best of the poem I think. I don't know how you could have made them any better. I also liked the 2nd line of the 5th stanza and the last line of the 7th stanza. They evoke images that are nice. Good job.

Bob Jordan

Re: Let This Be A Love Story (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Wednesday, 21st January 2009 @ 10:53:11 AM AEST
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this poem is so beautiful. it makes you want to fall in love with someone. the images it evokes are very powerful.

thank you for sharing.

Gen x

Re: Let This Be A Love Story (User Rating: 1 )
by toomuchfreetime on Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 02:47:28 PM AEST
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Oh! I like this one! I'ts beautiful! Very lovely job!

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