Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	10-June 17:27:34 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 147436 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled Sonnet [time] => 2009-01-14 10:51:24 [hometext] => I had to write for a class... [bodytext] => I sit here trying to understand why
Cause you are always a dream in my mind
No matter what I do, or what I try
It always seems that I’m a step behind
I’m striped of a feeling that I once had
And I know I can never have it back
You being so far away makes me sad
For you were the one that put me on track
So I just say come here and be what may
And let me feel your breath upon my skin
Hold me tenderly and forever stay
Don’t ever let love end, only begin
Now I will be waiting for you to see
That you need to come near and be with me
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 2 [informant] => butterflyperfect [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Untitled Sonnet

Contributed by butterflyperfect on Wednesday, 14th January 2009 @ 10:51:24 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I sit here trying to understand why
Cause you are always a dream in my mind
No matter what I do, or what I try
It always seems that I’m a step behind
I’m striped of a feeling that I once had
And I know I can never have it back
You being so far away makes me sad
For you were the one that put me on track
So I just say come here and be what may
And let me feel your breath upon my skin
Hold me tenderly and forever stay
Don’t ever let love end, only begin
Now I will be waiting for you to see
That you need to come near and be with me

Copyright Â© butterflyperfect ... [ 2009-01-14 10:51:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Untitled Sonnet (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 14th January 2009 @ 01:01:25 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Short but sweet write, I liked the tenderness within the words.

Michelle

Re: Untitled Sonnet (User Rating: 1 )
by spanky on Wednesday, 14th January 2009 @ 01:31:16 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Beautiful from beginning to end.
Frank

Re: Untitled Sonnet (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th January 2009 @ 06:21:17 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

stunningly beautiful. i really think that you've captured the essence of what sonnets are all about. it flowed perfectly (yes perfectly!) and was so deep and passionate. it reminded me why i love the sonnet so much. fantastic work.

with love,
-phil

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com