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Array ( [sid] => 147411 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost Without You [time] => 2009-01-13 01:56:45 [hometext] => My sister wrote this poem...feel free to comment [bodytext] => Times have changed tremendously and now I can only see you in my dreams, or in a daydream that is unclear to me.
Where has our love gone, and the future we promised to withold?
Im here and you're there.
Who would have ever supposed that beauty and the beast would no longer be as one?
Days are long, and nights are cold without your smooth skin keeping me warm, and the sunlight don't shine as bright without shining in your eyes.
What I planned was not this.
I feel like a desert with no cactus, a winter with no snow, a summer with no breeze, an autumn with no leaves.
Please tell me you gone come back to me so that the seasons can be complete,
and I can stand to bare to be with me.

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Lost Without You

Contributed by ginabelle on Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 01:56:45 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Times have changed tremendously and now I can only see you in my dreams, or in a daydream that is unclear to me.
Where has our love gone, and the future we promised to withold?
Im here and you're there.
Who would have ever supposed that beauty and the beast would no longer be as one?
Days are long, and nights are cold without your smooth skin keeping me warm, and the sunlight don't shine as bright without shining in your eyes.
What I planned was not this.
I feel like a desert with no cactus, a winter with no snow, a summer with no breeze, an autumn with no leaves.
Please tell me you gone come back to me so that the seasons can be complete,
and I can stand to bare to be with me.

Copyright © ginabelle ... [ 2009-01-13 01:56:45]
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Re: Lost Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by spanky on Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 08:43:36 AM AEST
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Poorly written...multiple spelling errors...same old sappy theme (love lost) over and over and over...your sister might do well to invest in a "Creative Writing" course.
Maybe she should have written it like this:
Lost without you-
Boo hoo boo hoo...
I'm oh so alone-
oh groan...oh groan...
My head is a'bustin!
Now, ain't that disgustin?
I can't find my shoe-
Did I give it to you?
My heart, it is broken...
My brains, they have spoken!
A liverwurst sandwich?
Ah...you prefer Manwich!
Oh, come kiss my eyeballs!
Ah, you prefer highballs...
And if you come back
I shall give you a whack!

Re: Lost Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 01:41:30 PM AEST
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i liked it. it was very creative.

-phil

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