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Steep in the darkness
accept this is your fate now
revel in the rage [comments] => 3 [counter] => 258 [topic] => 17 [informant] => Loende [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Haiku )

Revel

Contributed by Loende on Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 08:01:11 PM in AEST
Topic: Haiku

Steep in the darkness
accept this is your fate now
revel in the rage

Copyright © Loende ... [ 2009-01-11 20:01:11]
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Re: Revel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 09:13:39 PM AEST
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Hmmm... I read one of your forum posts and I think you were also saying there you could not write Haikus. which by the way, I have been unable to find the Silent-No-More poem I spoke of there.

Anywho...Haiku. They're not easy in my humble opinion. Sometimes they just seem to fall short and to get the meaning into them, in such a short and specific format is difficult. However, you seemed to have pulled it off...again, that is in this guy's humble opinion. I like it. Really, I do.

So...will you be taking a stab at the Haiku thread now? :D

Take care,

Tim

Re: Revel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 03:02:04 PM AEST
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good work.

-phil

Re: Revel (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 07:09:00 PM AEST
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This may not be your norm,
but you have done it well
Good work, my friend!
Smiles and Blessings to you and yours
Kara

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