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Your the only one that knows what's going on inside of me.
Your the only one who looks inside my heart each day.
So much confusion, and I don't understand,how can a person
be happy with everything around them, when they are not truely
happy themselves? Sure I love my children and I know that they
love me,but something els isn't right. There is something missing
and I'm not sure what it is. I need you to walk with me God.
Walk beside me and hold my hand. Show me the right way to go.
And please Lord, help me to be a better mother to my children
I am truely all they have to depend on. Help me Father to be
strong for them. Help me please to understand them and to be
patient with them, for they are my whole world, and I love them
so much.
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Dear God

Contributed by sidra on Friday, 9th January 2009 @ 11:13:29 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

Dear God,
Your the only one that knows what's going on inside of me.
Your the only one who looks inside my heart each day.
So much confusion, and I don't understand,how can a person
be happy with everything around them, when they are not truely
happy themselves? Sure I love my children and I know that they
love me,but something els isn't right. There is something missing
and I'm not sure what it is. I need you to walk with me God.
Walk beside me and hold my hand. Show me the right way to go.
And please Lord, help me to be a better mother to my children
I am truely all they have to depend on. Help me Father to be
strong for them. Help me please to understand them and to be
patient with them, for they are my whole world, and I love them
so much.

Copyright © sidra ... [ 2009-01-09 23:13:29]
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Re: Dear God (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Saturday, 10th January 2009 @ 10:28:22 PM AEST
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I feel this is every mothers' silent prayer & you have given it life. Even though we do our best, God is gracious in his love & guidance. I'm sure it's his pleasure, if we just ask. . . nicely done. peace & blessing. elle

Re: Dear God (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Saturday, 10th January 2009 @ 10:51:57 PM AEST
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Blessings to you
I hope your heart sees
what it searches for soon
Smiles
Kara

Re: Dear God (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 03:26:30 AM AEST
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This is beautiful it reminds me of when I was raising my three children alone.
I turned to God for total help.
I'm really proud of them and my Grandkids.
Keep the faith.
big huggs, luv, prayer, peace, hope, joy,
emy

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