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They howl for Hamas in the city street,.
Beg for their own distruction, beg and plead,
For master terrorists to well suceed,
Thus let it widly know that's what they need.

Permitting murderous Hezbullies to thrive,
The rocket thrower experts that contrive
Death and destruction yet folks beg for it.
Dull bannesrs waving clouding mind and wit.

Lo! Hezbullies and Hamas like this well
And hear this odd protesting with delight
To yet increase the encroaching force of hell,
And with more speed turn off the Western light.

Of 9/11 they had not enough t'd. seem,
Crowds plead for more of it, - they supplicate!
To finish off the sweet American dream
In dark Inferno's pit of boundless hate

Thus mourn dear friends, none can do more than mourn,
The passing of the right to self-defense,.
Mourn, grieve, friends by the coffin or the urn
The passing of the asset "Commonsense”
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The Death of Commonsense

Contributed by Elizabeth_Dandy on Wednesday, 7th January 2009 @ 05:42:30 PM in AEST
Topic: Event







They howl for Hamas in the city street,.
Beg for their own distruction, beg and plead,
For master terrorists to well suceed,
Thus let it widly know that's what they need.

Permitting murderous Hezbullies to thrive,
The rocket thrower experts that contrive
Death and destruction yet folks beg for it.
Dull bannesrs waving clouding mind and wit.

Lo! Hezbullies and Hamas like this well
And hear this odd protesting with delight
To yet increase the encroaching force of hell,
And with more speed turn off the Western light.

Of 9/11 they had not enough t'd. seem,
Crowds plead for more of it, - they supplicate!
To finish off the sweet American dream
In dark Inferno's pit of boundless hate

Thus mourn dear friends, none can do more than mourn,
The passing of the right to self-defense,.
Mourn, grieve, friends by the coffin or the urn
The passing of the asset "Commonsense”
.




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Re: The Death of Commonsense (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 7th January 2009 @ 05:46:25 PM AEST
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Dear sweet friend,
this is so truthful, well written and true.
So sad really isn't it.Thanks for sharing.

Hugs
Michelle


Re: The Death of Commonsense (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Wednesday, 7th January 2009 @ 10:53:27 PM AEST
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Dear friend it's a very emotional, but among this chaotic outburst have we not missing the disparate cry of the innocent God fearing people who die or see death of their loved ones caught in between the cross-fire.

One rotten apple in the basket; but is it fair to destroy the whole basket of apples? I wonder.

Thanks for shearing your emotions my friend.

With lots of love and respect.
FRANCO


Re: The Death of Commonsense (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 10:34:59 AM AEST
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Dear Franco!

Thanks for reading and commenting on this one. Unfortunately, the systematic destruction and total elimination of Israel aimed at by the terrorists, and their relentless and enduring rocket blasts make it imperative and unavoidable for Israel to take these very sad measures. They are surrounded and alone against so huge a force of evil that they have no option but to go to the root of the terror they are constantrly exposed to. Imagine if your own children were to go for years with bomb blasts continually in their mdidst, would you not do the same.? Besides, these terrorists hide their destructive weapons in schools, so the world thinks its Israel that aims at schools, instead of denouncing the terrorists for just deliberately doing that. Thus, the innocent are bound to suffer. as a result of Hamas' doings. They always hide ammunition in mosques and schools, so they can show the world what's happening. and fault the wrong party.

A develish ruse, right out of the Inferno. Trick, they have practised since years, and the stupid people fall for it.
I have a poem entitled "Wounded Sisters" about the Mumbai Blasts, and it seems to go all over the Subcontinent. published in print so widely. I don’t know how they ferreted it out. I am swamped with e-mails of gratitude for composing it, but it was not even read at YPDC. I just received a Law Journal from India were it is also published.

I am glad to learn you are still around at YPDC. I had an a ccident and am very slow, but it does not keep ,me from defending the "Innocent” whioch is this stance are the Israelis, just as were the Mumbai people. in India.

Love and peace
Elizabeth


Re: The Death of Commonsense (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 12:31:44 PM AEST
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you are correct to say this. people cry for hamas and support them, but hamas is the one firing rockets and causing this israeli reaction. hamas are destroying palestine and any hope for peace in the region. although israel is not without blame itself. its reaction does seem overtly disproportionate to the crime. too many innocent palestinians are being lost in this struggle. i have always supported israel in the past and i still believe that israel is a fully justified state, but for there to be peace the palestinians need independence, this would take away hamas' claim as a 'revolutionary party' and show them up for what they really are: a group of people who embrace hatred and will do anything to stop jews living in peace.

very interesting, thought provoking write.

-phil


Re: The Death of Commonsense (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 8th August 2010 @ 07:07:56 PM AEST
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Elizabeth dear.
BRAVO!BRAVO!BRAVO! Roses at your feet. This is very timely for our day, and also a "Masterpiece" of woe. Jews have suffered enough, and low, is not 6 million enough!
So well written ED, and true in every respect!
Champion of the "Underdog" always, courageous, brave, perfect!!!
Warm love,
consue




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