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Array ( [sid] => 147266 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => just give me an excuse [time] => 2009-01-06 11:23:24 [hometext] => I am really bad at this, but it helps me deal with a relationship turning to dust. [bodytext] =>
I find myself looking for an excuse,
to end this false relationship, this ruse.
Her multitude of lies say something in her character is lacking,
no longer any energy to deal with it, I want to send her packing.
Started with a high expectation,
bring her to America for a free education.
Tried to build a relationship but it was always one sided.
To her I was just the guy that pays her bills she decided.
Now once bright steel bonds of trust,
are tarnished, erroding with rust.
Caring, security, and honesty we did extend,
those were concepts she does not comprehend.

So I find myself looking for any excuse.

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just give me an excuse

Contributed by gmcse8 on Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 11:23:24 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I find myself looking for an excuse,
to end this false relationship, this ruse.
Her multitude of lies say something in her character is lacking,
no longer any energy to deal with it, I want to send her packing.
Started with a high expectation,
bring her to America for a free education.
Tried to build a relationship but it was always one sided.
To her I was just the guy that pays her bills she decided.
Now once bright steel bonds of trust,
are tarnished, erroding with rust.
Caring, security, and honesty we did extend,
those were concepts she does not comprehend.

So I find myself looking for any excuse.

Copyright © gmcse8 ... [ 2009-01-06 11:23:24]
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Re: just give me an excuse (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 06:41:13 PM AEST
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oh dear. it is never good when feelings and gestures aren't reciprocated. a good write though, very powerful.

-phil

Re: just give me an excuse (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 7th January 2009 @ 12:31:31 AM AEST
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There's nothing wrong with your writing.
Hang tuff, friend.
Huggs, blessings,
emy

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