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[aid] => mick
[title] => she needs you
[time] => 2009-01-04 22:34:07
[hometext] => First off, i doubt this will rhyme, I wrote it basically to say it. It is to a girl who is mad at a friend of mine, and hers. theyve been best friends for about 7 years and now lets just say they grew apart
[bodytext] => how do you explain yourself ditching a friend like that youve known her longer than i and i still have her back And i know exactly how you feel It hurt me when i heard but i learned to get along even if you knew her first she may have thrown her life away hanging out in the wrong crowd starting using drugs but her progress has made me proud she isnt perfect yet but neither are you just because i cant find a flaw doesnt mean your perfection is true just because you were able to stay clean doesnt mean you have the right to be mad Im straightedge and clean also so i know exactly how bad how much it hurts to see someone so great sec um to that but shes gotten so much better its really not so bad Im not gonna say I wasnt mad i would rather she stopped it but i love her so much it out shines the difference You were her best friend i was nothing i forgave her you arent even attempting Im not condoning her actions not saying its alright for her but its reality so learn to make it work We are the only hope the only ones she knows who are clean now her healths an issue so use you're common sense that Ive seen just cause your life is not the same that is no excuse she just needs a trusting friend she needs someone like you in a town full of negatives she needs someone like us a positive role model and i cant be enough with just me, one man I cant convince her to change her life around but two close friends taking a stand will be enough to bring that special girl back around the one you were such great friends with the girl love with all my heart the one with all the potential I just need you to start. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 43 [informant] => owkenny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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