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Array ( [sid] => 147213 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cradle to the Cage [time] => 2009-01-04 12:10:00 [hometext] => I`m trying to say have faith in other hearts.. [bodytext] => Here is one truth
if you choose,
from the "cradle, to the cage
answer for it all.

The effort remains
till the very last breath
one sin leads You to another.

Don`t be afraid
if the chances are thinning,
its in every heart and soul,
"We never say enough.

Scattering the ashes
they never needed much more
to tell you the "truth
its whats in the Other hearts.

There You will stand
on some wind sweep hill..
looking down at the "dirt
that covers My smile.....Vincent [comments] => 6 [counter] => 266 [topic] => 21 [informant] => crow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Cradle to the Cage

Contributed by crow on Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 12:10:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Here is one truth
if you choose,
from the "cradle, to the cage
answer for it all.

The effort remains
till the very last breath
one sin leads You to another.

Don`t be afraid
if the chances are thinning,
its in every heart and soul,
"We never say enough.

Scattering the ashes
they never needed much more
to tell you the "truth
its whats in the Other hearts.

There You will stand
on some wind sweep hill..
looking down at the "dirt
that covers My smile.....Vincent

Copyright © crow ... [ 2009-01-04 12:10:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Cradle to the Cage (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 05:10:50 PM AEST
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Hmmmm... positive and uplifting yet one's hurting soul can sometimes cause them to no longer have faith in other's hearts. Yeah, I have trust issues. :-) I like the poem, though...so please don't get me wrong. Very well endowed with cool metaphors. I especially like

There You will stand
on some wind sweep hill..
looking down at the "dirt
that covers My smile

Thanks for an enjoyable read.

Tim

Re: Cradle to the Cage (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 05:58:13 PM AEST
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very good writing again vincent.

-phil

Re: Cradle to the Cage (User Rating: 1 )
by ribbons_and_lace09 on Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 06:34:11 PM AEST
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very good! i loved it!

Re: Cradle to the Cage (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 10:25:11 PM AEST
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Tantalizing, mezermerising,
wo any ways this write rocks,
You just reach and grab the heart.
awesome!
huggs, smiles, blessings, trust,
emy

Re: Cradle to the Cage (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Monday, 5th January 2009 @ 06:13:25 PM AEST
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i appreciate you for this write
faith is important to hang on to
a beautiful write
smiles and love
kara

Re: Cradle to the Cage (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 05:52:30 PM AEST
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i don't know about anyone else but this gave me chills, lol, vivid excellent,

hugs n' love nessa

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