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Array ( [sid] => 147194 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Light Up The Sky [time] => 2009-01-03 14:45:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When the sky opens up will you hold me down.
Do as I promise and break what I say.
Tomorrow is just another day.
Another day when im with you.
The lights in this city are never to bright.
So turn them up and we値l walk on this fake sunshine all day.
But you never change your clothes so they値l soon fade.
And with it you値l be gone.
And ill be sat here.
I値l be sat here.

I see my self in your dreams.
The way you hold it close.
Holding him as I stand in the background.
Growing to big for this city
You can take the man away from the game.
But inside you値l never feel the same.

I wear a white suit
But inside im darker then your eyes.
Your awake too much , you池e a mess.
But keep on wearing that dress.
And I値l steal another line out of your mouth.
As you kick and shout.
And with it you値l be gone.
And I値l be sat here.
I値l be sat here.


I see my self in your dreams.
The way you hold it close.
Holding him as I stand in the background.
Growing to big for this city
You can take the man away from the game.
But inside you値l never feel the same.

When the sky opens up will you hold me down ?.
Do you know who I am ?.
Tomorrow is just another day.
When I sit there.
Sit here and be the man in the background.

Hold me in these stars.
Hold me in these stars.
Bright scars open up the sky.
Like the dim-lit lantern it is.
Spread across a two page spread.
I値l hold you down when the sky opens up. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 266 [topic] => 34 [informant] => liamleash [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Light Up The Sky

Contributed by liamleash on Saturday, 3rd January 2009 @ 02:45:37 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



When the sky opens up will you hold me down.
Do as I promise and break what I say.
Tomorrow is just another day.
Another day when im with you.
The lights in this city are never to bright.
So turn them up and we値l walk on this fake sunshine all day.
But you never change your clothes so they値l soon fade.
And with it you値l be gone.
And ill be sat here.
I値l be sat here.

I see my self in your dreams.
The way you hold it close.
Holding him as I stand in the background.
Growing to big for this city
You can take the man away from the game.
But inside you値l never feel the same.

I wear a white suit
But inside im darker then your eyes.
Your awake too much , you池e a mess.
But keep on wearing that dress.
And I値l steal another line out of your mouth.
As you kick and shout.
And with it you値l be gone.
And I値l be sat here.
I値l be sat here.


I see my self in your dreams.
The way you hold it close.
Holding him as I stand in the background.
Growing to big for this city
You can take the man away from the game.
But inside you値l never feel the same.

When the sky opens up will you hold me down ?.
Do you know who I am ?.
Tomorrow is just another day.
When I sit there.
Sit here and be the man in the background.

Hold me in these stars.
Hold me in these stars.
Bright scars open up the sky.
Like the dim-lit lantern it is.
Spread across a two page spread.
I値l hold you down when the sky opens up.



Copyright ﾂｩ liamleash ... [ 2009-01-03 14:45:37]
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Re: Light Up The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Saturday, 3rd January 2009 @ 09:24:00 PM AEST
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oh! this is absolutely incredible. i kept wanting to highlight certain lines as my favorite, but then I would fall in love with the next line and the next and so on!
great write, buddy!

--Katie


Re: Light Up The Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by amber_vonHorror on Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 06:16:18 AM AEST
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excellent job.
this is a wonderful piece, your special.




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