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Array ( [sid] => 147174 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Adore-Ability [time] => 2009-01-02 03:04:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => 'I just want to know how love feels
and no one can tell me'
she said
'I've tried to love someone
but I do only for a while
and I get bored

or I run away.
when I sense they
will one day see through
me
and reject me
so I leave
or reject them first.

I don't believe that anyone
who really gets close to me
will really really love me
when they find out what I am really like.'
He said:
'Really like? '
'Well I don't think deep thoughts
and some times guys want you
to talk about deep stuff.
I am not really deep yet.
I will be one day
but I am not yet.

Some guys want you to be easy
so they can get into your pants
and I will not do that.
Other guys just want to be friends
and that's ok.
But they sooner or later want more.

I guess I just don't know who I am right now
or what I want.

I just know that I am insecure.

I know I am insecure
but does that mean
I can't have love?

He said:
I think you are adorable. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lnnie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Adore-Ability

Contributed by lnnie on Friday, 2nd January 2009 @ 03:04:01 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

'I just want to know how love feels
and no one can tell me'
she said
'I've tried to love someone
but I do only for a while
and I get bored

or I run away.
when I sense they
will one day see through
me
and reject me
so I leave
or reject them first.

I don't believe that anyone
who really gets close to me
will really really love me
when they find out what I am really like.'
He said:
'Really like? '
'Well I don't think deep thoughts
and some times guys want you
to talk about deep stuff.
I am not really deep yet.
I will be one day
but I am not yet.

Some guys want you to be easy
so they can get into your pants
and I will not do that.
Other guys just want to be friends
and that's ok.
But they sooner or later want more.

I guess I just don't know who I am right now
or what I want.

I just know that I am insecure.

I know I am insecure
but does that mean
I can't have love?

He said:
I think you are adorable.

Copyright © lnnie ... [ 2009-01-02 03:04:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Adore-Ability (User Rating: 1 )
by Chamaron on Friday, 2nd January 2009 @ 08:57:12 PM AEST
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Being insecure doesn't mean you can't love. It's just that you have to learn to love yourself a little more, so you can realize that you deserve to be loved and can love in return.

Good write and best of luck in matters of love.

Re: Adore-Ability (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd January 2009 @ 06:57:32 AM AEST
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interesting work.

-phil

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