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Array ( [sid] => 147106 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => goodbye letter [time] => 2008-12-29 18:53:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Dear Friend,
If I turn in any direction,
I find a lovely thought of you.
If I seem upset,
it's just the baby inside me
wanting you. . . I loved you.
I surrender to the truth
that I cannot have you.
I can't.
You have no time
for me.
I wish you did.
I taste of honey
& my skin's as soft
as rose petals.
& still
I am lonely.
Life is showing
me it's secrets. . .
how to wait, how to let go.
I fell very calm.
& very, very pleased.
I await
the will of heaven. . .
peace, my brohter. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 341 [topic] => 52 [informant] => elle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

goodbye letter

Contributed by elle on Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 06:53:56 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Dear Friend,
If I turn in any direction,
I find a lovely thought of you.
If I seem upset,
it's just the baby inside me
wanting you. . . I loved you.
I surrender to the truth
that I cannot have you.
I can't.
You have no time
for me.
I wish you did.
I taste of honey
& my skin's as soft
as rose petals.
& still
I am lonely.
Life is showing
me it's secrets. . .
how to wait, how to let go.
I fell very calm.
& very, very pleased.
I await
the will of heaven. . .
peace, my brohter.

Copyright © elle ... [ 2008-12-29 18:53:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: goodbye letter (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 09:00:11 PM AEST
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This is so sweet yet touched with hints of sadness.
You worded this well, and took the reader along.
Nice work.

Michelle

Re: goodbye letter (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th December 2008 @ 12:27:24 PM AEST
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i loved it, superb flow and it was so easy to read. great work.

-phil

Re: goodbye letter (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 2nd February 2009 @ 01:33:51 AM AEST
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wow. This one kinda left me speechless. Excellent!!!

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