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The truth is she was born into a broken world
that has forever bound her in chains.
Everyone learned she was just one tortured soul
that needed and couldn’t find an escape.
But after they learned the reasons for her mask,
her smile,
they understood she has become a survivor.
So now people have empathy for her
and look up to who she has become.
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Broken-Winged Butterfly

Contributed by butterflyperfect on Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 02:54:59 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Her name tells of how it was with her.
The truth is she was born into a broken world
that has forever bound her in chains.
Everyone learned she was just one tortured soul
that needed and couldn’t find an escape.
But after they learned the reasons for her mask,
her smile,
they understood she has become a survivor.
So now people have empathy for her
and look up to who she has become.

Copyright Â© butterflyperfect ... [ 2008-12-29 14:54:59]
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Re: Broken-Winged Butterfly (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 04:13:19 PM AEST
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sometimes the most beautiful is the most simplistic, great work.

-phil

Re: Broken-Winged Butterfly (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 08:55:46 PM AEST
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wow very nice write and if i do ever find the answer i will let you know

Tiffyo4

Re: Broken-Winged Butterfly (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 09:11:44 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem. Loved the ending as well.
Michelle

Re: Broken-Winged Butterfly (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 5th January 2009 @ 09:54:57 PM AEST
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Very beautiful, wise write.
Huggs,
emy
It's very powerful in it'a own right.

Re: Broken-Winged Butterfly (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 11:05:08 PM AEST
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Excellent Excellent flow
Powerful Indeed....

Re: Broken-Winged Butterfly (User Rating: 1 )
by kye on Sunday, 8th March 2009 @ 05:49:42 PM AEST
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I also agree that this poem is powerful.

My next thought was even broken, a butterfly is enthralling. The saga of a butterfly is amazing.

It sounds like (she) is an amazing person.

Keep writing!

Kie

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