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Of our happily ever after
We’ve got these wild dreams
We’ll fabricate with laughter.

Laying in your arms, I tell
The stories our hands weave.
For once I feel something,
Love I never want to leave.

Stepping stones to get to you,
Over raging rivers so bold.
But nothing could stop me
Once within your heart’s hold.

Words of ones once wise, I know
Be ever cautious, I really am.
But I’m ready to destroy
This emotionally isolating dam.

No man is an island, but can’t I be?
I was, until you rowed a boat to me.
Oh beautiful soul, how did you know?
To take a chance on someone ready to go?

So willingly, so innocently, so persistent
You are all I needed, wanted, could ask for.
There’s no way I could repay you,
But no one but I could love you more. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 248 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Chamaron [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

No One Could Love You More (Than I Do)

Contributed by Chamaron on Thursday, 25th December 2008 @ 10:16:09 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

We’ve got these wild ideas
Of our happily ever after
We’ve got these wild dreams
We’ll fabricate with laughter.

Laying in your arms, I tell
The stories our hands weave.
For once I feel something,
Love I never want to leave.

Stepping stones to get to you,
Over raging rivers so bold.
But nothing could stop me
Once within your heart’s hold.

Words of ones once wise, I know
Be ever cautious, I really am.
But I’m ready to destroy
This emotionally isolating dam.

No man is an island, but can’t I be?
I was, until you rowed a boat to me.
Oh beautiful soul, how did you know?
To take a chance on someone ready to go?

So willingly, so innocently, so persistent
You are all I needed, wanted, could ask for.
There’s no way I could repay you,
But no one but I could love you more.

Copyright Â© Chamaron ... [ 2008-12-25 22:16:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: No One Could Love You More (Than I Do) (User Rating: 1 )
by djs on Friday, 26th December 2008 @ 09:21:31 AM AEST
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i sincerely hope that whomever you wrote this about realizes how lucky they are to have you. you are great with your words.

Re: No One Could Love You More (Than I Do) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 06:20:13 AM AEST
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a very powerful, touching write. the first stanza was the best, the word 'fabricate' fitted perfectly in there, good job.

-phil

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