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Array ( [sid] => 147013 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Path To Peace [time] => 2008-12-23 18:56:21 [hometext] => To those in need... I think. I'm givin' it a shot =P. (Not meant to be a poem about religion!) [bodytext] => -

It's not between, you and them,
As you may well have known.
Then tell me the way, that I have come.
To see the pain you've shown.

If you were nice, good or sweet,
In a futile attempt to please,
You'd be used to your extent,
And eventually, brought to your knees.

If you do, find peace, in this world,
Don't waste it all on them.
They don't deserve, what you have,
Alone, they are condemned.

Give the world, the best you've got.
It still, may never be enough.
But I'll console you, with my words...
The path to peace is rough. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 308 [topic] => 63 [informant] => Mars [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )

Path To Peace

Contributed by Mars on Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 06:56:21 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

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It's not between, you and them,
As you may well have known.
Then tell me the way, that I have come.
To see the pain you've shown.

If you were nice, good or sweet,
In a futile attempt to please,
You'd be used to your extent,
And eventually, brought to your knees.

If you do, find peace, in this world,
Don't waste it all on them.
They don't deserve, what you have,
Alone, they are condemned.

Give the world, the best you've got.
It still, may never be enough.
But I'll console you, with my words...
The path to peace is rough.

Copyright © Mars ... [ 2008-12-23 18:56:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Path To Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by HelloImEL on Wednesday, 24th December 2008 @ 12:08:08 AM AEST
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nice poem man i actually love the 3rd stanza thats like quoteable lol

Re: Path To Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 24th December 2008 @ 11:33:52 AM AEST
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great work.

-phil

Re: Path To Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Wednesday, 24th December 2008 @ 06:39:59 PM AEST
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you have spoke the truth, dont stop,,a friend in words,,spooky

Re: Path To Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th January 2009 @ 06:35:11 PM AEST
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Now this is a very nice encouraging poem. Your thoughtfulness and compassion shines through in your writing.

Take care,

Tim

Re: Path To Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 10:26:01 PM AEST
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it is Ineresting..I feel it is a good work. venkat

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