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As our faces near
And passion flares out of control
Safe in your hands
No inhibitions
I loose total control
No keeping back
Just letting go

Our bodies move together
Hands searching,
Grabbing, holding,
Exploring, finding
Mouths hungry
Just letting go

Passion like this
Only persist
Where real love exists
Like ours
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Misty Windows

Contributed by SilverRain on Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 03:29:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Misty windows
As our faces near
And passion flares out of control
Safe in your hands
No inhibitions
I loose total control
No keeping back
Just letting go

Our bodies move together
Hands searching,
Grabbing, holding,
Exploring, finding
Mouths hungry
Just letting go

Passion like this
Only persist
Where real love exists
Like ours

Copyright © SilverRain ... [ 2008-12-23 15:29:12]
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Re: Misty Windows (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 04:45:04 PM AEST
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A touching little piece here. I am sure many can relate to this type of passion.

Peace
~Shannon

Re: Misty Windows (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 04:58:30 PM AEST
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i really like this one.keep on.

Re: Misty Windows (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 05:24:30 PM AEST
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Wow...
This one grabs and doesn't let go.
Alive and raw emotions.
Very well expressed and great flow!

~~Oceandreamer~~

Re: Misty Windows (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 06:26:13 PM AEST
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lusty imagery, i loved it!

-phil

Re: Misty Windows (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 07:56:13 AM AEST
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Tightly composed, passionate kudos to the sustained lust of true love. Well done (gave me a little jump in my seat...)

Spike

Re: Misty Windows (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 09:41:46 PM AEST
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Very passionate and sensual imagery. Methinks it is like...wow...really takes the reader to the moment you have captured here.

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