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packed to the brim with death and strife
just want it to end and surrender to the darkness
so i don't have to feel the pain of being heartless
right and wrong blur in the deepest circle of hell
all i can see are corpses as my blood begins to swell
i can't keep fighting this war in my mind
struggling against my darker self all the time
i cant stop this flood of burning hate
a horrid rage that just won't disipate
it flows like a storm from my callous soul
it burns into flesh as i pay the bloody toll
i long to watch my body decay as my bones dry
i dont want to live anymore, i just want to die
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Waitibg to Die

Contributed by solidsnake116 on Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 01:10:40 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

i've had enough of this so called life
packed to the brim with death and strife
just want it to end and surrender to the darkness
so i don't have to feel the pain of being heartless
right and wrong blur in the deepest circle of hell
all i can see are corpses as my blood begins to swell
i can't keep fighting this war in my mind
struggling against my darker self all the time
i cant stop this flood of burning hate
a horrid rage that just won't disipate
it flows like a storm from my callous soul
it burns into flesh as i pay the bloody toll
i long to watch my body decay as my bones dry
i dont want to live anymore, i just want to die

Copyright © solidsnake116 ... [ 2008-12-23 01:10:40]
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Re: Waitibg to Die (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 01:50:43 AM AEST
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Dark. It's a great poem, only hope it isn't an overwhelming emotion.
Solid snake, eh?
I love mgs, if that is what you refer to...
Have a wonderful day.
^_^
-Catz

Re: Waitibg to Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 12:51:32 PM AEST
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yes, this is as dark as it gets. i liked how you made it flow but put a lot of passion into it. great work.

-phil

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