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Array ( [sid] => 146980 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life [time] => 2008-12-22 17:07:43 [hometext] => This is basically about my life. [bodytext] => I'm struggling to break-free
From the depths of insanity.
I cut to know i'm still alive,
i want this to end, my painful life.
Nobody knows that i cut my hip,
If they found out , they'd give me jip.
So i ask you please, Get out of my head?
Or tomorrow, as you know, i will be dead.
If you do not leave me alone,
Then i shall haunt you, when your at home.
If i ever get to heavens above,
Then boy! i know i will be loved.
Unlike the life that i have here,
It makes me want to shed a tear,
I'd rather sit up here, in the clouds,
And make it rain upon your house. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 61 [informant] => TechnoNinja [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Life

Contributed by TechnoNinja on Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 05:07:43 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I'm struggling to break-free
From the depths of insanity.
I cut to know i'm still alive,
i want this to end, my painful life.
Nobody knows that i cut my hip,
If they found out , they'd give me jip.
So i ask you please, Get out of my head?
Or tomorrow, as you know, i will be dead.
If you do not leave me alone,
Then i shall haunt you, when your at home.
If i ever get to heavens above,
Then boy! i know i will be loved.
Unlike the life that i have here,
It makes me want to shed a tear,
I'd rather sit up here, in the clouds,
And make it rain upon your house.

Copyright © TechnoNinja ... [ 2008-12-22 17:07:43]
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Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 06:50:53 PM AEST
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a very sad poem. i've felt like this myself, especially 5 years ago. i just drained all the poisons away and i got through it, although there are still some poisons of the past that won't go away. c'est la vie. great write, however.

-phil

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflyperfect on Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 10:43:10 PM AEST
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I know how it feels to be haunted by something. I know how it feels to want to escape it all and give up. Last year I almost was ready to follow through, but with time light started to shine through. Writing helps me and this write is incredible and beautiful. Sometimes the best writes are the ones that can be the most painful or strongest of our emotions. The important thing is to not give up because it is not worth it, there are to many other things to look forward to even if you can't see them now.
Look forward to reading more, Keep Writing!
Good Luck!
-Butterfly

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