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[aid] => mick
[title] => Nerves in Purple
[time] => 2008-12-21 12:42:48
[hometext] => Hi, this is my first submission, and is a sonnet i have written (10 syllabels per line, 14 lines). Sorry if the idea of a sonnet seems pretentious to some, I just enjoy the challenge the structure offers. Leave feedback please.
[bodytext] => I know you’re going to be there tonight, I think I like you more than my mates know, I pull on my shirt, it’s your favourite Colour, purple. I’m excited, nervous. We head out queue for ages, pay a bomb, I know its money well spent, the bar calls. I order Dutch courage, one tequila, Two tequila, three tequila, Floor! The Dance floor! You’re there! Dancing… with some tall bloke… Suddenly I’m blind to everything Bar your hips grinding into him. Sick, numb, My eyes force me to stare at you sucking Face with Mr Tall. I always thought you Were out of my league. Now I know for sure… [comments] => 1 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 21 [informant] => DHarsanyi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
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