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Array ( [sid] => 146955 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fading Sunset [time] => 2008-12-21 06:11:53 [hometext] => Sometimes a morbid feeling takes me to this plane of existence a parallel of life death and destiny, or is it hidden desire? [bodytext] => The sound of rustling leaves in trees
The cool breeze on my face
As I unwind I forget
This wretched human race

The ocean slapping on the beach
As I wash the blood stain
Off my face and hands
It begins to rain

A sun shower a gentle reminder
Nature at it’s best
Draws a smile from my face
What a wicked test

No answers for the blood
Just the solemn feeling inside
Of something bad and good
As I watch the ocean tide

Sirens in the background
I suppose it’s for me they come
My smile broadens on my lips
I remember a tune and start to hum!

Friday, 17 October 2008
8:35:25 AM [comments] => 2 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 59 [informant] => Balmain_Tiger [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

Fading Sunset

Contributed by Balmain_Tiger on Sunday, 21st December 2008 @ 06:11:53 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

The sound of rustling leaves in trees
The cool breeze on my face
As I unwind I forget
This wretched human race

The ocean slapping on the beach
As I wash the blood stain
Off my face and hands
It begins to rain

A sun shower a gentle reminder
Nature at it’s best
Draws a smile from my face
What a wicked test

No answers for the blood
Just the solemn feeling inside
Of something bad and good
As I watch the ocean tide

Sirens in the background
I suppose it’s for me they come
My smile broadens on my lips
I remember a tune and start to hum!

Friday, 17 October 2008
8:35:25 AM

Copyright Â© Balmain_Tiger ... [ 2008-12-21 06:11:53]
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Re: Fading Sunset (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Sunday, 21st December 2008 @ 06:19:09 AM AEST
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I simply do not make a habit of making a post on my own poems. But this one is just so weird and enticing, yet scary and morbid. I get scared that it came from me. I suppose because I can understand it....

It is not a place i go to often but occasionally I write from here.

I think it keeps me sane to realise that these can be the thoughts of a true psychotic.... or perhaps I have just read too many books

Re: Fading Sunset (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 03:40:20 AM AEST
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this poem is verging on suicidal. although i can understand it completely. the world can be a cruel, lonely place at times. good write though.

-phil

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