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The weather man
Contributed by
Afterhours
on
Saturday, 20th December 2008 @ 06:48:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Overcast , with showers to come,
one look in your eye and the forecast was grim,
you brought me thought,
you brought me life,
and without notice you sold it all for half a night.
Retrace your steps........... butterfly the effect,
my problem is, i'm a man of vinyl...
& particuarly old skool when it comes to ***** another.
So turn the coggs and fire up the crank,
this rolling stone continues to turn....
*mental note* for future loss,
my definition........... for gathered moss.
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Re: The weather man
(User Rating: 1 ) by lnnie on
Saturday, 20th December 2008 @ 05:16:51 PM AEST (User
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Well, this is something. Such pithy strong writing.
This person is clear about their values, expertly
rendered.
And love that title.
Always great when the titles say something about the poem |
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