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Array ( [sid] => 146924 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => broken thoughts [time] => 2008-12-19 03:16:49 [hometext] => umm...just curious to see other peoples thoughts i guess [bodytext] => I don't know what it is
I slowly get depressed inside
I keep trying to repress the feelings I have
But every now and then I find myself contemplating
Suicide?

A perfect match but not for her
Translucent
Her eyes make me an empty ghost
Second place in a race against misery
but the blame lies only in impossible wants
...Needs?

Is failure finally an option?
Surrender my fake hope
or torture myself with the unreachable.
Time works against me in a blind race
to the ever darkening unknown

Lonely is soon to have a new meaning
just when I get close I am as far away as I ever could be
why am I tormented like this?
..why do I torment myself?

My wishes are my silent downfall
I am slowly dying from the inside
the poison in my blood
grows stronger every day

Death means nothing to me now
it is almost even welcomed
I embrace war so others stay
Let me fight so my brothers
can have their day [comments] => 3 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Anon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
broken thoughts

Contributed by Anon on Friday, 19th December 2008 @ 03:16:49 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I don't know what it is
I slowly get depressed inside
I keep trying to repress the feelings I have
But every now and then I find myself contemplating
Suicide?

A perfect match but not for her
Translucent
Her eyes make me an empty ghost
Second place in a race against misery
but the blame lies only in impossible wants
...Needs?

Is failure finally an option?
Surrender my fake hope
or torture myself with the unreachable.
Time works against me in a blind race
to the ever darkening unknown

Lonely is soon to have a new meaning
just when I get close I am as far away as I ever could be
why am I tormented like this?
..why do I torment myself?

My wishes are my silent downfall
I am slowly dying from the inside
the poison in my blood
grows stronger every day

Death means nothing to me now
it is almost even welcomed
I embrace war so others stay
Let me fight so my brothers
can have their day




Copyright © Anon ... [ 2008-12-19 03:16:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: broken thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by snoopington on Friday, 19th December 2008 @ 06:06:30 AM AEST
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great write vert emotional.....

all the best.........

m.............


Re: broken thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 19th December 2008 @ 01:23:26 PM AEST
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yes, a very deep and emotional write. i've felt like that at times myself. not nice.

-phil


Re: broken thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Friday, 19th December 2008 @ 05:05:41 PM AEST
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I read your words and found my self here with this to say.....

I fell into depression once in my life, It's like a deep dark pit. suppose that's why it's called a fall.

Somehow we endure. Learn to climb out and back to reality and find the hope that remains for us all.





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