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How to Fix the World
Contributed by
HERO
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Thursday, 18th December 2008 @ 02:18:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I had this feeling that had me stealing all the good inside you
And used it up like it wasn't enough to stop the pain I went through
This changed our lives for a time where all of our debts were due
Then eventually we both came to see the reality of the black and blue
I learned how to fix the world when I searched the galaxy
But I wanted to find what it would be like if there was a you and me
I learned how to fix the world when I searched through space and time
But that's not what I wanted to know deep down inside
I wanted you to see what you meant to me and all my dark obsession
Needed you to know that I'd sunk so low in this one great confession
But now I think that before I blink since I'm no longer in depression
Maybe they won't stay astray to feel the intense sensation
You and I can confide in each other so long as we are together
We can make it through just me and you in all sorts of stormy weather
Just walk away from the darkest day and float away just like a feather
Inside the tide of forgotten pride and let your mind be free forever
Copyright ©
HERO
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2008-12-18 14:18:02] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: How to Fix the World
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th December 2008 @ 06:31:03 PM AEST (User
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very good write. i loved the rhyme scheme, it worked very well. the last stanza was stunning.
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Re: How to Fix the World
(User Rating: 1 ) by Loende on
Friday, 19th December 2008 @ 11:33:28 PM AEST (User
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You've penned quite a complex piece here that's very elegant. A very nice job. Thank you for posting it.
Be well,
Loende |
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