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The loneliness never gets to you
And the tears never show

So I'm still here with a broken heart
Loneliness feeding on my soul
And the tears always show

But wounds always heal
This loneliness will leave my soul
My heart will once again smile

That loneliness will find you one day
When your lies have come undone
And bitterness has set in

But I won't be there to clean up your mess
I've spent too long investing everything
Getting nothing back

So you can try to walk from this broken heart
Pretend the loneliness doesn't bother you
But the tears are beginning to show

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Congratulations

Contributed by karoody on Wednesday, 17th December 2008 @ 02:47:05 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

So you can walk from a broken heart
The loneliness never gets to you
And the tears never show

So I'm still here with a broken heart
Loneliness feeding on my soul
And the tears always show

But wounds always heal
This loneliness will leave my soul
My heart will once again smile

That loneliness will find you one day
When your lies have come undone
And bitterness has set in

But I won't be there to clean up your mess
I've spent too long investing everything
Getting nothing back

So you can try to walk from this broken heart
Pretend the loneliness doesn't bother you
But the tears are beginning to show

Copyright Â© karoody ... [ 2008-12-17 02:47:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Congratulations (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 17th December 2008 @ 08:53:53 AM AEST
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So many feelings...:-)
venkat

Re: Congratulations (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 17th December 2008 @ 12:43:31 PM AEST
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i would call it karma, biting him back. a very emotional, passionate and vivid write. excellent work.

-phil

Re: Congratulations (User Rating: 1 )
by navydocny on Wednesday, 17th December 2008 @ 01:44:31 PM AEST
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Chin up kiddo....
minute, by minute, hour, by hour, day, by day....
If you have to let it out the let it out.....
Great write as always....
Steve

Re: Congratulations (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 17th December 2008 @ 09:59:23 PM AEST
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Wow, you really drive the message home and straight to the heart with this one, Karabeara! You're right though, wounds do heal but (sigh) the damn things can leave a scar.

You have really captured a spectrum of feeligs here, sadness, anger, and a happy positive note with that up swing where your heart will smile again. Don't know what's going on but....

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Take care,

Tim

Re: Congratulations (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 17th December 2008 @ 10:07:12 PM AEST
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Beautiful work as always, deeply touched by

your abundance of emotional offerings laced

with pure artistry . . .

thank you like wise for your read

deeply appreciated . . .

Ben . . .

Re: Congratulations (User Rating: 1 )
by lonely_boy on Thursday, 18th December 2008 @ 12:33:14 AM AEST
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wonderful write. full of emotion. it took me down memory lane. i love it.

if you get the chance, take a look at my poem "your turn"

take care.

Re: Congratulations (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Thursday, 18th December 2008 @ 05:41:56 AM AEST
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the tears may not be wet but they will scar

Re: Congratulations (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Thursday, 18th December 2008 @ 11:01:12 AM AEST
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very emotional great write
hope things start to get better though
again great write and hope to read more soon
-kelly

Re: Congratulations (User Rating: 1 )
by twick on Wednesday, 24th December 2008 @ 01:31:38 AM AEST
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so I see some spunk in this write, which makes me happy in ways I'm not sure I could articulate. I really like this one, it has a nice finger jester moment at the end that I'll edit for unsuspecting readers.

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