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Array ( [sid] => 146821 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lied and used [time] => 2008-12-14 00:51:39 [hometext] => This poem is about a guy who lied and lied just to get what he wanted [bodytext] => I can’t believe you tricked me like a fool
What you did to me was a little bit cruel
I gave 100% of me to you
Thinking like an idiot you feeling were true
Was it all a joke?
The way your acting looks like you’re on coke
You said you were trying to figure me out
The next day I find out you’re moving down south
What the hell is wrong with you?
You go around and break people’s hearts
Randomly throwing your stick playing darts
I can’t get you out of my mind,
I don’t understand you were so kind
Was it your past that hurt you in a way where you’ll never be the same
And that’s why you’re going around playing this heartless game
Maybe you’re forgetting that I have feeling too
Thanks to you I can’t sleep at nights
I feel like a prisoner who doesn’t know her rights
I still think about you, I won’t lie
The pain you caused me makes me want to die
I don’t know why I am even wasting time,
I should stop feeling like I have committed a crime
You are like the painful bruise that won’t go away
And that is something that hurts everyday
That day when I saw you talking outside
I had a feeling it was her you were trying to hide
I know you have someone in the dark
But I think your heart is dead to the point that it will never spark
So why are you being unfaithful to her?
Thank you for widening my eyes
Letting me know that you were full of lies
Don’t think I will drown
And make you feel like you deserve a crown
I will heal in time
Screw your richness, your career and your looks
And everything you learned from books








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Lied and used

Contributed by Abigail on Sunday, 14th December 2008 @ 12:51:39 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I can’t believe you tricked me like a fool
What you did to me was a little bit cruel
I gave 100% of me to you
Thinking like an idiot you feeling were true
Was it all a joke?
The way your acting looks like you’re on coke
You said you were trying to figure me out
The next day I find out you’re moving down south
What the hell is wrong with you?
You go around and break people’s hearts
Randomly throwing your stick playing darts
I can’t get you out of my mind,
I don’t understand you were so kind
Was it your past that hurt you in a way where you’ll never be the same
And that’s why you’re going around playing this heartless game
Maybe you’re forgetting that I have feeling too
Thanks to you I can’t sleep at nights
I feel like a prisoner who doesn’t know her rights
I still think about you, I won’t lie
The pain you caused me makes me want to die
I don’t know why I am even wasting time,
I should stop feeling like I have committed a crime
You are like the painful bruise that won’t go away
And that is something that hurts everyday
That day when I saw you talking outside
I had a feeling it was her you were trying to hide
I know you have someone in the dark
But I think your heart is dead to the point that it will never spark
So why are you being unfaithful to her?
Thank you for widening my eyes
Letting me know that you were full of lies
Don’t think I will drown
And make you feel like you deserve a crown
I will heal in time
Screw your richness, your career and your looks
And everything you learned from books












Copyright © Abigail ... [ 2008-12-14 00:51:39]
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Re: Lied and used (User Rating: 1 )
by FORDIE on Wednesday, 17th December 2008 @ 02:53:20 PM AEST
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Good poem, you really set the tone throughout.


Re: Lied and used (User Rating: 1 )
by djs on Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 10:09:27 AM AEST
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you painted a great image of the pain you are suffering. may you heal in time.




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