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Array ( [sid] => 146806 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ire [time] => 2008-12-13 05:45:22 [hometext] => Still hoping, praying and fighting for her.... [bodytext] => Low is my head to profoundly pray
Obeisance splayed upon bended knee
To hear sweet words that love may say
To recover such beloved as thee

My longing ire’s against what’s naught
What slipped away my one precious gift
From tireless joy to laboriously fraught
Faith that one day my soul will be shrift

No other prayers, no other credence
There’s naught ever more tangible a fray
Than to fight dying love’s impedance
Finding again that most treasured cache

Not a day’s moment, not one moment given
Does the hope do not pass to finally be shriven
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Ire

Contributed by navydocny on Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 05:45:22 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Low is my head to profoundly pray
Obeisance splayed upon bended knee
To hear sweet words that love may say
To recover such beloved as thee

My longing ire’s against what’s naught
What slipped away my one precious gift
From tireless joy to laboriously fraught
Faith that one day my soul will be shrift

No other prayers, no other credence
There’s naught ever more tangible a fray
Than to fight dying love’s impedance
Finding again that most treasured cache

Not a day’s moment, not one moment given
Does the hope do not pass to finally be shriven

Copyright Â© navydocny ... [ 2008-12-13 05:45:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Ire (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 04:13:09 PM AEST
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I love the language you picked for this write, Steve!
Your words flow to the heart beautifully and gracefully.
I am so glad to be back on here and reading again.
Can't wait for more!
Hugs Smiles and Blessings to you and yours always
Kara

Re: Ire (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 05:36:55 PM AEST
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Steve,
good to see a post and be able to read it.
I love this style it is so fitting.
I hope you are doing well over there.

Hug From Texas

Michelle

Re: Ire (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th December 2008 @ 06:34:46 PM AEST
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you've used some fantastic words in this one. it is a fantastic poem actually, it is heartfelt, articulate and it flows very well. great work.

-phil

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