Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 17:51:10 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 146789 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tears of Despair [time] => 2008-12-12 11:47:43 [hometext] => The taste of your blood consumes me for an eternity. please kill me. [bodytext] => Close my eyes as we cry
Touching my fingertips to your battered lips
An eternity of this is not enough
I have to withdraw to catch my fury
Departing into your passion for death
My first kiss of you was matted in blood
How you tasted so fine
You stare at me and cry
Your tears of despair
Darkness is all I have to offer
Raining in my mouth
The taste of your blood
Consumes me for eternity
Please do not leave
The fear tastes so good
Lapping at my own disguise
It does not matter if I die
I always will feel lament
Grief is my happiness
Sleeping in the rain
How I feel when I scream
Falling into the cave of despair
Give me your lips of blood
Wet my fingers in them
Kiss me tenderly
Take my blade and pierce my skin
Deeper and deeper
You thrust
Crying you drift away
I grab you but you run
I am alone again
A sudden quietness
I die alone once more
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 36 [informant] => williamdye [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Tears of Despair

Contributed by williamdye on Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 11:47:43 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Close my eyes as we cry
Touching my fingertips to your battered lips
An eternity of this is not enough
I have to withdraw to catch my fury
Departing into your passion for death
My first kiss of you was matted in blood
How you tasted so fine
You stare at me and cry
Your tears of despair
Darkness is all I have to offer
Raining in my mouth
The taste of your blood
Consumes me for eternity
Please do not leave
The fear tastes so good
Lapping at my own disguise
It does not matter if I die
I always will feel lament
Grief is my happiness
Sleeping in the rain
How I feel when I scream
Falling into the cave of despair
Give me your lips of blood
Wet my fingers in them
Kiss me tenderly
Take my blade and pierce my skin
Deeper and deeper
You thrust
Crying you drift away
I grab you but you run
I am alone again
A sudden quietness
I die alone once more

Copyright © williamdye ... [ 2008-12-12 11:47:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Tears of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by Mars on Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 04:06:11 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I though this was pretty interesting. Especially the last line. Well written, seems to flow well, at least for me. I'm not quite sure how to feel, but it still is a good write =).

Re: Tears of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 05:55:18 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Great write, very sad though
Hope you start to feel different but all the same I hope to read more soon
-kelly

Re: Tears of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 06:48:24 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

well it's a dark but excellent write. the imagery is marvellous and it all flows so well. great work.

-phil

Re: Tears of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by ratty on Wednesday, 21st January 2009 @ 07:08:04 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Great written.....

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com