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Array ( [sid] => 146780 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => PEACE but war comes along [time] => 2008-12-11 20:17:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i saw the road ahead of me
not scared
a bit full bliss
hearts are full
minds are clean
all i got now
is a ruck on my back
heading down to the middle east
where its warm and full of hate
where lives are differnt there
and faces are covered
where my brother die
from another bomb planted
on the side of the road
where there is life
there is freedom
i fight for peace
and well being
i also fight for things most wont understand
so call me crazy
when i go to war with destruction
and a peace sign
drawn on my helmet

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PEACE but war comes along

Contributed by blasko on Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 08:17:08 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

i saw the road ahead of me
not scared
a bit full bliss
hearts are full
minds are clean
all i got now
is a ruck on my back
heading down to the middle east
where its warm and full of hate
where lives are differnt there
and faces are covered
where my brother die
from another bomb planted
on the side of the road
where there is life
there is freedom
i fight for peace
and well being
i also fight for things most wont understand
so call me crazy
when i go to war with destruction
and a peace sign
drawn on my helmet

Copyright © blasko ... [ 2008-12-11 20:17:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: PEACE but war comes along (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 11:00:34 PM AEST
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First,
I'd like to say welcome to our global family here at YPDC.

Next, this is a never get old masterpeice.
Once being married to a man that was is the Navy USA, later having a son in the Army USA I can relate to this in a very personal way.
This write reminds me of David and Goliath in bible days.
I don't begin to understand war but I do understand the soilders. I understand the many sacrifices they and their family make all for PEACE.
I understand the soilder, the wife, the children etc. can't leave out brothers, sisters, grand parents, all human kind 'cause no matter who you are hatred hurts all.
This holiday season I pray for peace to all our soilders, familys, all.
Allso can't leave out the ones, that gave their lives and the ones left behind.
And you I pray you have the best Christmas day ever.
I have much admiration and humbleness to all.
May Jesus (our reason for the season) give your hearts desire and blessing beyond compare.
Such a powerfull, touching write that will stand long after we've gone to God.
Luv, huggs, blessings, prayer,
emy
Be safe in God's luv for all, in Jesus name, Amen!

Re: PEACE but war comes along (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 08:09:29 AM AEST
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a good insight into the mindset of soldiers who go into these terrible conflicts. i salute you sir, good writing.

-phil

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