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Array ( [sid] => 14676 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Your the one i want [time] => 2003-03-21 15:25:00 [hometext] => I cant put it in better words [bodytext] => I need a girl that's real
one who understands me and knows how i feel
Im not lookin for some breezie thats fake
I need someone who isnt full of air and can keep me awake

I need a girl with flowing long beautiful brown hair
shes got gorgeous brown eyes and no one can compare
I need a girl who loves the stars and the moon
and she loves to sleep in, till about noon

I need a girl to be my queen
that dosent have her head up in the clouds, if you know what i mean
yea...she'll hug me and be my shoulder, if i cry
a lifelong friend....my true love....untill the day that i die [comments] => 5 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 43 [informant] => wil_ca [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Your the one i want

Contributed by wil_ca on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 03:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I need a girl that's real
one who understands me and knows how i feel
Im not lookin for some breezie thats fake
I need someone who isnt full of air and can keep me awake

I need a girl with flowing long beautiful brown hair
shes got gorgeous brown eyes and no one can compare
I need a girl who loves the stars and the moon
and she loves to sleep in, till about noon

I need a girl to be my queen
that dosent have her head up in the clouds, if you know what i mean
yea...she'll hug me and be my shoulder, if i cry
a lifelong friend....my true love....untill the day that i die

Copyright © wil_ca ... [ 2003-03-21 15:25:00]
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Re: Your the one i want (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 04:35:17 PM AEST
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Hey!!! I have long, beautiful, brown hair... and I love sleeping in late...noon is sometimes too soon... :>)
Thanks for the smile...
Jenni

Re: Your the one i want (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 05:03:31 PM AEST
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Sounds so much like what I wish for in a man - minus the long hair - well actually I kinda like men with healthy long hair...giggle,giggle. Anyway - hold out Prince Charming - never settle for less and your Princess is certain to appear.....
Good poem!
Thanks for sharing.....
juliette..

Re: Your the one i want (User Rating: 1 )
by theangelestdevil on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 08:30:30 PM AEST
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you'll find a girl like that dont worry. great poem

Re: Your the one i want (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 01:39:37 AM AEST
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Hey This Is A Beautiful. I have brown hair to my shoulders sorry. I sleep in till noon or more

Re: Your the one i want (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 10:50:57 PM AEST
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I like this. I think your dream girl would come along soon. She'll come out when she's already she'll know when the time is right.

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