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So here they run again
It all belongs to them.
The village,
The streets,
Hamlet and electric heath.

Such technicolour,
Such fancy.
Metastasized necromancy.

N- will speak of bread and Circe,
Juvenal of girth and sword
Death below for others Papa.

Snug in your toad stoll
After supper
shades of grey, death on display.
They'll sigh.
Yet in the end
Smurf Nazi's in designer smocks
Will die. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 2486 [topic] => 64 [informant] => Incognito_Bombastus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

Smurf Porn

Contributed by Incognito_Bombastus on Sunday, 7th December 2008 @ 09:22:56 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

Smurf Porn

So here they run again
It all belongs to them.
The village,
The streets,
Hamlet and electric heath.

Such technicolour,
Such fancy.
Metastasized necromancy.

N- will speak of bread and Circe,
Juvenal of girth and sword
Death below for others Papa.

Snug in your toad stoll
After supper
shades of grey, death on display.
They'll sigh.
Yet in the end
Smurf Nazi's in designer smocks
Will die.

Copyright © Incognito_Bombastus ... [ 2008-12-07 21:22:56]
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Re: Smurf Porn (User Rating: 1 )
by Cathi on Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 03:41:15 AM AEST
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What an excellent piece of writing! I love the rhythm and the shock imagery - the ambiguity of innocence and death.

Cathi

Re: Smurf Porn (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 03:03:29 AM AEST
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This is very creative, thought provoking writing.
Welcome to our global family here at YPDC.
Huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: Smurf Porn (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Tuesday, 16th December 2008 @ 10:12:36 PM AEST
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Very different I liked it though good write
-kelly

Re: Smurf Porn (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 18th December 2008 @ 10:02:31 PM AEST
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Interesting imagery... Nicely done..
Jenni

Re: Smurf Porn (User Rating: 1 )
by Antzus on Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 07:23:31 AM AEST
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This made me laugh. Not sure if that's the right response? :-P
Can't wait for the sequel

Re: Smurf Porn (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 09:34:13 AM AEST
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very interesting

Re: Smurf Porn (User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 02:53:53 AM AEST
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I could give a one word adjective describing how this poem made me feel or what it made me think. I don't have any constructive criticism, not to say it doesn't need work and I don't have any compliments, not to say it's bad.

Keep writing though. It has a nameless value I suppose. Or do you suppose? Maybe it was Smurfette who supposed, but supposing she did suppose you would suppose because she and I supposedly supposed.

There is no cure for smurf porn. *Sigh*

Re: Smurf Porn (User Rating: 1 )
by nirupam on Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 11:05:58 PM AEST
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really provocative in its vocabulary, imagery, and rhythm

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