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Array ( [sid] => 146694 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Him [time] => 2008-12-07 10:20:28 [hometext] => i wrote this poem for my recently ex boyfriend Sam [bodytext] => I found out
And right away
I called and got
The address that day
The first letter i wrote
Said we could just be friends
But in his letter back
He said he loved me to no end
So i continued to write
And to love him back
Even in spite
Of all the bad
I was there for him
When no one else
And i was there
With nothing for myself
But then i found
That there was no trust
Just worry and grief
And for him just lust
So i cried for a day
And wrote him a letter
To let him know
That things wouldnt get better
With all the worry
While hes gone
And all the worry
When he comes home
I let him know
That i was done
Until he showed
That i was the one
I cant control him
When he gets out
He will cheat, lie, and steal
Its what hes about
So let me just say
That ill be ok
Because I will find
Just what i seek one day [comments] => 1 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Samsgurl16 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Him

Contributed by Samsgurl16 on Sunday, 7th December 2008 @ 10:20:28 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I found out
And right away
I called and got
The address that day
The first letter i wrote
Said we could just be friends
But in his letter back
He said he loved me to no end
So i continued to write
And to love him back
Even in spite
Of all the bad
I was there for him
When no one else
And i was there
With nothing for myself
But then i found
That there was no trust
Just worry and grief
And for him just lust
So i cried for a day
And wrote him a letter
To let him know
That things wouldnt get better
With all the worry
While hes gone
And all the worry
When he comes home
I let him know
That i was done
Until he showed
That i was the one
I cant control him
When he gets out
He will cheat, lie, and steal
Its what hes about
So let me just say
That ill be ok
Because I will find
Just what i seek one day

Copyright © Samsgurl16 ... [ 2008-12-07 10:20:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Him (User Rating: 1 )
by snoopington on Sunday, 7th December 2008 @ 01:32:41 PM AEST
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i think this is your best work,
you might not agree because its clearly a touchy subject,very emotional i really like it......

all the best..........

m...............

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