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Array ( [sid] => 146653 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cheated [time] => 2008-12-03 22:54:00 [hometext] => I wrote this recently.... just finally had to put my feelings to down on paper [bodytext] => I always thought I deserved to be,
Respected and admired
But all you ever saw in me
Was the fufillment of needs you desired.

Don't you think she'd care?
If she knew you lusted for me
Why do we have to share?
A guy who's a liar, this shouldn't be.

I sit here, sad, reflecting, on all the things you've said.
But you did it all deliberately and put misleading thoughts into my head.

I miss the man i used to know
The one who truly cared
Where did he go?.... I'll never know
And now I sit here scared.

So many things I've realized and all the pain I've endured
For all those moments in your arms- feeling so secured.

I've always helped you cheat, but yet I'm being cheated
Tried to fight, but not tonight
My willpower's been defeated.

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 22 [informant] => kellycat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Cheated

Contributed by kellycat on Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 10:54:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I always thought I deserved to be,
Respected and admired
But all you ever saw in me
Was the fufillment of needs you desired.

Don't you think she'd care?
If she knew you lusted for me
Why do we have to share?
A guy who's a liar, this shouldn't be.

I sit here, sad, reflecting, on all the things you've said.
But you did it all deliberately and put misleading thoughts into my head.

I miss the man i used to know
The one who truly cared
Where did he go?.... I'll never know
And now I sit here scared.

So many things I've realized and all the pain I've endured
For all those moments in your arms- feeling so secured.

I've always helped you cheat, but yet I'm being cheated
Tried to fight, but not tonight
My willpower's been defeated.

Copyright © kellycat ... [ 2008-12-03 22:54:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Cheated (User Rating: 1 )
by treadingshallowfire on Thursday, 4th December 2008 @ 02:56:08 AM AEST
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i like it
is sounds like a true event
your awesome

Re: Cheated (User Rating: 1 )
by snoopington on Thursday, 4th December 2008 @ 07:05:52 AM AEST
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i liked it too good flow and very heart felt

all the best

m............

Re: Cheated (User Rating: 1 )
by navydocny on Thursday, 4th December 2008 @ 09:10:02 PM AEST
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Ironically painful how we enable our own pain. We will refuse to believe what is plainly in front of us for love, blindly embracing deception...
Very good write and very heartfelt....
Thanks for sharing...
Steve

Re: Cheated (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th December 2008 @ 10:27:15 AM AEST
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quite a powerful poem, very strong and very fluent as well. i could feel your passion. very good indeed.

-phil

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