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[title] => Not Today
[time] => 2008-11-30 18:19:44
[hometext] => Ever have one of those days?
[bodytext] => Why is it to flee
Today this day of all days
Faith and conviction
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Not Today
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navydocny
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Sunday, 30th November 2008 @ 06:19:44 PM in AEST
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Why is it to flee
Today this day of all days
Faith and conviction
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Re: Not Today
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by Loende on
Sunday, 30th November 2008 @ 06:28:53 PM AEST
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This time of year...yeah, I have those days...more often than not. It's a hollow feeling and you've captured it here.
Hope, my friend, remains, even when our faith falters, even when nothing else is there. Hope.
Be well, be safe, Steve,
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Re: Not Today
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 06:30:02 AM AEST
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Damn, I hate that you of all people should be feeling this. It's bad enough
the circumstances of where you are and all .. not to mention life's
little difficulties ....
Hold on to hope, Steve. I have had days like this and even LONGER
moments when I'd like to kick Hope's, well, you know what. But
she has never failed me. I have to believe. She never gives up,
even when we do.
Prayers and wishes to you, as always
~ Breezy
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Re: Not Today
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by Lilymaemax on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 04:30:14 PM AEST
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| Hi steve yes have had" one of those days "quite a lot recently.But sure thats life and we hope tomorrow will be better for us all in whatever way we are living.Lilymae |
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Re: Not Today
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 06:10:04 PM AEST
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excellent haiku, its funny how those two go together, hope tomorrow brings you a lighter heart,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Not Today
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 12:57:09 AM AEST
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We all have those days Steve. But I think you have days most of us are blessed to not have. It is for your sacrifice and your choice and conviction to duty that most of us don't have those days.
You are a hero (though I am sure you won't accept that title). Not only for your place in life, but for your ability to take more than most of us can and not only survive but find things to muse about (and yes even do this). I know there is hope within you. It fills up the mind when your words are expressed.
I know you will find a reason for your hope for God will find you well in something which makes more sense someday soon. It is we who have hope and faith in you. It is your conviction that makes those feelings validated.
BRAVO!
my prayers, thoughts, and respect with you
Daniel |
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