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Array ( [sid] => 146562 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => you can have it all [time] => 2008-11-29 15:03:50 [hometext] => imagination's the mind's basic science [bodytext] => In the meadow of a past time, were the trees flrousished at the moment of dawn, Throwing their giant branches into the sky.
The sky would brace for the collision of the two, bit's of beautiful shiny glass fell like waves as the branche became one with the sky.
the ground shook with a pleasent tickle while the roots of the tree deteriated the soil beaneath, mixing the ingredients of life.
In the meadow of a past time, love was the main chemical that turned the wheel. if you lost your love, you lost your soul.
The tree's were eventually unloved, and began to fall apart from it's grip, holding on with one last root, the tree became the first of thousands.
The sun began to shine brighter, for no trees were alive to breathe in her threathening air.
traveling to this meadow, will be a long and sometimes frightening adventure, but an adventure none the less.
open the doors of you mind, let imagination seep through your every spore.
Only then will you find the spark, that will start the greatest fire you're eyes will ever behold. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 73 [informant] => SamJoelle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
you can have it all

Contributed by SamJoelle on Saturday, 29th November 2008 @ 03:03:50 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract



In the meadow of a past time, were the trees flrousished at the moment of dawn, Throwing their giant branches into the sky.
The sky would brace for the collision of the two, bit's of beautiful shiny glass fell like waves as the branche became one with the sky.
the ground shook with a pleasent tickle while the roots of the tree deteriated the soil beaneath, mixing the ingredients of life.
In the meadow of a past time, love was the main chemical that turned the wheel. if you lost your love, you lost your soul.
The tree's were eventually unloved, and began to fall apart from it's grip, holding on with one last root, the tree became the first of thousands.
The sun began to shine brighter, for no trees were alive to breathe in her threathening air.
traveling to this meadow, will be a long and sometimes frightening adventure, but an adventure none the less.
open the doors of you mind, let imagination seep through your every spore.
Only then will you find the spark, that will start the greatest fire you're eyes will ever behold.




Copyright © SamJoelle ... [ 2008-11-29 15:03:50]
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Re: you can have it all (User Rating: 1 )
by navydocny on Saturday, 29th November 2008 @ 07:44:42 PM AEST
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Very nicely done....
Great post!
Steve


Re: you can have it all (User Rating: 1 )
by 3660Days on Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 10:15:50 AM AEST
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Very nice and unique.




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