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[aid] => mick
[title] => Drug abuse and deppresion
[time] => 2008-11-27 23:49:25
[hometext] => this is my 3rd poem and im starting to get used to it ..(please comment)
[bodytext] => I took a deep breath as i inhaled the smoke and almost felt like dying as i put it in my lungs and started to choke.my mom always told me never to drugs but i don't know why i didn't listened cause i started hanging with the thugs.they told me that its perfectly harmless and that every thing your parents say is a lie but ever since i started to listen i just wanted to die.so i went to the ''homies'' and asked if i can borrow their gun they asked if whatever I was gonna do with it was fun i answered with a crooked smile I'm done.I put the needle down and raised the gun put it to my brain as i pulled the trigger and felt the blast then i said to myself life isn't a game as i put the bullet to my brain
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Drug abuse and deppresion
Contributed by
poetking123
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Thursday, 27th November 2008 @ 11:49:25 PM in AEST
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I took a deep breath as i inhaled the smoke and almost felt like dying as i put it in my lungs and started to choke.my mom always told me never to drugs but i don't know why i didn't listened cause i started hanging with the thugs.they told me that its perfectly harmless and that every thing your parents say is a lie but ever since i started to listen i just wanted to die.so i went to the ''homies'' and asked if i can borrow their gun they asked if whatever I was gonna do with it was fun i answered with a crooked smile I'm done.I put the needle down and raised the gun put it to my brain as i pulled the trigger and felt the blast then i said to myself life isn't a game as i put the bullet to my brain
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Re: Drug abuse and deppresion
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by sbs on
Friday, 28th November 2008 @ 12:47:33 AM AEST
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very powerful message...I liked that specially this one
"life isn't a game as i put the bullet to my brain
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Re: Drug abuse and deppresion
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by Puppy on
Friday, 28th November 2008 @ 05:11:13 AM AEST
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wow..this is poem delivers a very power and important message...i enjoyed!
Puppy :)
p.s thanks for your msg (",) |
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Re: Drug abuse and deppresion
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by snoopington on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 08:38:23 AM AEST
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i really love your flow very passionate and emotional
keep it up.
m........... |
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