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Array ( [sid] => 146529 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Without You [time] => 2008-11-27 20:16:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I will not be able to write
without you;

There will be no new lines
or ideas;
until
I hear in my mind
you breathing;
hear two hearts beating
above this page.

Even this
next word
isn't real
unless I envision
that it will
by you read;

that it will be felt
by you too.

Any eager beginning
is meaningless
unless
you sit with me here.


I move my chair now;
as evening comes
to better see
what to write;


This phrase too
and the next one or two
awaits my imagining
you'll see the words flow here.

I can't say when the words
will come;
they'll surprise;

but I am very clear
who they are for,

and they will sail
across this paper
buffeted by the gentle breeze
of we two breathing;
hearts beating.

Nothing happens
unless I feel
you share it too.

Dear Reader
I feel you.

and more. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lnnie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Without You

Contributed by lnnie on Thursday, 27th November 2008 @ 08:16:59 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I will not be able to write
without you;

There will be no new lines
or ideas;
until
I hear in my mind
you breathing;
hear two hearts beating
above this page.

Even this
next word
isn't real
unless I envision
that it will
by you read;

that it will be felt
by you too.

Any eager beginning
is meaningless
unless
you sit with me here.


I move my chair now;
as evening comes
to better see
what to write;


This phrase too
and the next one or two
awaits my imagining
you'll see the words flow here.

I can't say when the words
will come;
they'll surprise;

but I am very clear
who they are for,

and they will sail
across this paper
buffeted by the gentle breeze
of we two breathing;
hearts beating.

Nothing happens
unless I feel
you share it too.

Dear Reader
I feel you.

and more.




Copyright © lnnie ... [ 2008-11-27 20:16:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Thursday, 27th November 2008 @ 10:42:14 PM AEST
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what wonderful sharing. . . thank you. elle


Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by sbs on Friday, 28th November 2008 @ 12:52:44 AM AEST
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wow that was so great
i didn't expect the ending...
but you really did a great job here
so thank you 4 sharing this




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