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Though your pain is here to stay,
I will remember this day.

And you might not see,
How much it hurts me,
To let you be set free.

The unspoken thoughts
~and there would be lots~
Would sit in my brain and rot.

I will look you in the eye,
To witness your goodbye.
But know that I will cry. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 32 [informant] => yellow_sundragon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Look You In The Eye

Contributed by yellow_sundragon on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I won't look away,
Though your pain is here to stay,
I will remember this day.

And you might not see,
How much it hurts me,
To let you be set free.

The unspoken thoughts
~and there would be lots~
Would sit in my brain and rot.

I will look you in the eye,
To witness your goodbye.
But know that I will cry.

Copyright © yellow_sundragon ... [ 2003-03-21 04:35:00]
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Re: Look You In The Eye (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 05:13:26 AM AEST
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deep and full of emotion... excellent poem... i hope "son" sees this... blessings...

Re: Look You In The Eye (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 12:12:27 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem.
Michelle

Re: Look You In The Eye (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 02:18:10 PM AEST
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very well written beautiful poem
Sharon

Re: Look You In The Eye (User Rating: 1 )
by EyesRustedShut on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 11:48:59 PM AEST
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Re: Look You In The Eye (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 10:19:08 AM AEST
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An extreme thank you is needed for this Ive never had anyone write something about me
before I love this it makes me want to cry and as for the end where you say you might not cry
I wouldnt want you to If I were to take my own life everyone should party because that is my dream once again thank you

SS is JF

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