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Someday
Contributed by
Orpheus
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Monday, 24th November 2008 @ 06:02:40 PM in AEST
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Someday when life on earth is done
And we are gathered on the shore,
We'll honour God's begotten Son
And sing forevermore.
And every thought of earth below,
And any sorrow there might be,
Out of our minds will quickly go
For all eternity.
Someday the Lord will cast away
The sinners who've despised His grace,
And they will not, to their dismay,
Abide before His face.
Someday the Lord will come, and I
Anticipate it more each day,
Because I know, though now I cry,
He'll wipe each tear away.
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Orpheus
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2008-11-24 18:02:40]
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Re: Someday
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by Loende on
Monday, 24th November 2008 @ 06:12:09 PM AEST
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Oh, wow....this is a lovely piece. I always love faith based writing because it's always an encouragement to me as I try to walk my own narrow road. This is uplifting and truthful and was something that I needed to read right when you posted it. Great job. Thank you for your post and may He bless you.
Be well,
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Re: Someday
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by iodinelove on
Monday, 24th November 2008 @ 08:51:17 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC--
always, abraham |
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Re: Someday
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by RitalinKid on
Tuesday, 25th November 2008 @ 01:48:53 PM AEST
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| As a confessed atheist and also as a neurotic twenty something abstract nonsensical twenty something nay sayer. The form is pristine AND it flows. Beautifully done with or without the content. Cheers |
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Re: Someday
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th November 2008 @ 04:56:43 PM AEST
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liked it. thanks for posting. rhyme not just for rhymes sake but it's thought out.
Christopher |
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