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Array ( [sid] => 146406 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Something's Wrong [time] => 2008-11-19 19:16:29 [hometext] => It has been said that pain and agony are the greatest of teachers. The stove principle suggests the pain of touching a hot burner will cause a change in behavior. Just the briefest glance at human history suggests there is a lesson we need to learn. [bodytext] => Something's Wrong


Soon and Libet,
they both agree;
If they aren't enough,
take a look at hissssstory;
If you're still not convinced,
go ahead, put your hand on that burner again,
I think you'll see;
Eventually I think you'll see...

Some.............thing's...............wrong;
Something is wrong!

Man killing man,
till what we've got is a blood red sea;
A lust-greed social mindset,
that chains us all to I, my and me;
There's awl...there's always a lesson
comes with pain and misery;
This ain't the way it's supposed to be;
Don't you see?

Some.............thing's...............wrong;
Something is wrong!

Whatever it is,
it's been with us all along;
While Love and Peace grow weak,
it just keeps on gettin' strong;
Our sun, it seems to be setting,
pretty soon we'll all be gone;
We gotta' learn a new song;
and we don't have long...

Some.............thing's...............wrong;
Something is wrong!

It's waiting for us when we wake up;
it's there when we fall asleep;
It's a part of everything we say, feel and think,
week after week;
We teach it to our children;
we give it voice when we speak;
Whatever it is it's everywhere;
and it don't play fair?

Some.............thing's...............wrong;
Something is wrong!

With patronizing intuitive dribble
it has paralyzed our hearts;
Appealing to our egos,
it's jellified our thinkin' parts;
Just 'cuz it's always been this way
is no reason we gotta stay;
We've got to break away from the herd
and run some other way...

Some.............thing's...............wrong;
Something is wrong!

When life gets this out of whack
you gotta' know the cure won't come easy;
The tyrants of personal dysfunction
won't be topple with more appeasing;
Whatever it is that we've always been doing
that's put us in this hell hole where we are,
it hasn't worked and it ain't workin';
no, it ain't workin'...

Some.............thing's...............wrong;
Something is wrong!

Back to Soon and Libet,
and their clinical discoveries;
The functional "I" speaks,
and the conscious "I" merely agrees...
There it is; a Rock of Truth;
the cure for our disease...
Don't like it? Tough! Better get used to it,
'cause it's reality,
and it's why...

Some..............thing's...............wrong;
Something is wrong!


November 19, 2008
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 34 [informant] => enigma [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Something's Wrong

Contributed by enigma on Wednesday, 19th November 2008 @ 07:16:29 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Something's Wrong


Soon and Libet,
they both agree;
If they aren't enough,
take a look at hissssstory;
If you're still not convinced,
go ahead, put your hand on that burner again,
I think you'll see;
Eventually I think you'll see...

Some.............thing's...............wrong;
Something is wrong!

Man killing man,
till what we've got is a blood red sea;
A lust-greed social mindset,
that chains us all to I, my and me;
There's awl...there's always a lesson
comes with pain and misery;
This ain't the way it's supposed to be;
Don't you see?

Some.............thing's...............wrong;
Something is wrong!

Whatever it is,
it's been with us all along;
While Love and Peace grow weak,
it just keeps on gettin' strong;
Our sun, it seems to be setting,
pretty soon we'll all be gone;
We gotta' learn a new song;
and we don't have long...

Some.............thing's...............wrong;
Something is wrong!

It's waiting for us when we wake up;
it's there when we fall asleep;
It's a part of everything we say, feel and think,
week after week;
We teach it to our children;
we give it voice when we speak;
Whatever it is it's everywhere;
and it don't play fair?

Some.............thing's...............wrong;
Something is wrong!

With patronizing intuitive dribble
it has paralyzed our hearts;
Appealing to our egos,
it's jellified our thinkin' parts;
Just 'cuz it's always been this way
is no reason we gotta stay;
We've got to break away from the herd
and run some other way...

Some.............thing's...............wrong;
Something is wrong!

When life gets this out of whack
you gotta' know the cure won't come easy;
The tyrants of personal dysfunction
won't be topple with more appeasing;
Whatever it is that we've always been doing
that's put us in this hell hole where we are,
it hasn't worked and it ain't workin';
no, it ain't workin'...

Some.............thing's...............wrong;
Something is wrong!

Back to Soon and Libet,
and their clinical discoveries;
The functional "I" speaks,
and the conscious "I" merely agrees...
There it is; a Rock of Truth;
the cure for our disease...
Don't like it? Tough! Better get used to it,
'cause it's reality,
and it's why...

Some..............thing's...............wrong;
Something is wrong!


November 19, 2008




Copyright © enigma ... [ 2008-11-19 19:16:29]
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Re: Something's Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 20th November 2008 @ 01:18:11 AM AEST
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Incredible work, my friend.
huggs, prayer, peace,
emy


Re: Something's Wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 15th March 2009 @ 12:37:01 PM AEST
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Wow...so many truths in this... an awesome write... well done..
Jenni




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