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Down a lonely road
Im just tryin to find a place
To shake off my load

My friends all forsake me
The ladies all let me down
So im jumpin on that number 9
And headin to another town

Now im riddin in sorrow
Down a lonely track
And I just now realized
There aint no turnin back
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Sorrow

Contributed by outlawpoet on Monday, 17th November 2008 @ 06:22:13 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Im walin in sorrow
Down a lonely road
Im just tryin to find a place
To shake off my load

My friends all forsake me
The ladies all let me down
So im jumpin on that number 9
And headin to another town

Now im riddin in sorrow
Down a lonely track
And I just now realized
There aint no turnin back

Copyright © outlawpoet ... [ 2008-11-17 18:22:13]
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Re: Sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Monday, 17th November 2008 @ 07:24:41 PM AEST
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Simple but well put together
Very good I liked it sorry your in sorrow
Keep writing
-kelly

Re: Sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 18th November 2008 @ 01:00:46 PM AEST
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Good flow to the words here.
I am sorry I lost ya the other night...

Poem is nice my friend but so darn sad.
Yes the end said a lot. There is no turning back and sometimes that is both bitter and sweet at one emotion. We cannot go back, and at times if we could would it be worth it?? We must move forward from our heartache there is better yet to come.

Hugs
Michelle

Re: Sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 01:44:22 AM AEST
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excellent life poetry, beautiful writing,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 10:56:53 PM AEST
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I can remember times like this.
Great writing even in the sad.
Hang tuff friend as joy cometh in the morning.
Big huggs, luv, smiless, blessings, joy peace,
emy

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