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"I still love you , i wanna be your friend".
She touches his hand, closes her eyes.
Tears burn on the inside.
He lets out one final sigh,
As the sun begins to die.
Out of sight the shadows of the two stretch far and wide.
She's leaving with half of her sanity and all of his pride.

Blowing a knife shaped kiss.
The lips it misses.
Hits him square in the chest.
Now the pains finish him off.
On his knees he falls.
The spot light lands on him.
As everyone walks on by.
He weeps and cries, laughs and sighs.
Momentium catches him and sweeps him off his feet.
He has to try and land back on top of the world.

She's walking the woods, mountains and rivers.
Crawling the rocks and cliffs, falling down the hills and snow.
She's going madder day by day.
Grief has set in and she's mourning herself to sleep.
Everyday and morning she cuts a bit more inside.
With this knife shaped kiss she blows into the mirror.
Settling her eyes on face, and facing her worse enemy.
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Knife Shaped Kiss.

Contributed by liamleash on Monday, 17th November 2008 @ 06:35:14 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

So this is how it'll be , this is how it has to end.
"I still love you , i wanna be your friend".
She touches his hand, closes her eyes.
Tears burn on the inside.
He lets out one final sigh,
As the sun begins to die.
Out of sight the shadows of the two stretch far and wide.
She's leaving with half of her sanity and all of his pride.

Blowing a knife shaped kiss.
The lips it misses.
Hits him square in the chest.
Now the pains finish him off.
On his knees he falls.
The spot light lands on him.
As everyone walks on by.
He weeps and cries, laughs and sighs.
Momentium catches him and sweeps him off his feet.
He has to try and land back on top of the world.

She's walking the woods, mountains and rivers.
Crawling the rocks and cliffs, falling down the hills and snow.
She's going madder day by day.
Grief has set in and she's mourning herself to sleep.
Everyday and morning she cuts a bit more inside.
With this knife shaped kiss she blows into the mirror.
Settling her eyes on face, and facing her worse enemy.
She blows one last time.

Copyright © liamleash ... [ 2008-11-17 06:35:14]
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Re: Knife Shaped Kiss. (User Rating: 1 )
by tres_estrellas on Monday, 17th November 2008 @ 06:42:01 AM AEST
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Beautiful. Amazingly suggestive. I feel the pain. Love it.

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