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are what every lady
want in a man the
woman of your dreams
is very lucky to have
you and your child you
are the sun on a cloudy
day you are the stars in
the blue skies you are the
rainbow after a rain storm
you are the water i drink
your skin is like fine silk
your lips they taste like
honey your eyes are a dream
come true your touch melts
me in my spot the look's you
give me make me wet.

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Young

Contributed by cutey on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

yong my darling you
are what every lady
want in a man the
woman of your dreams
is very lucky to have
you and your child you
are the sun on a cloudy
day you are the stars in
the blue skies you are the
rainbow after a rain storm
you are the water i drink
your skin is like fine silk
your lips they taste like
honey your eyes are a dream
come true your touch melts
me in my spot the look's you
give me make me wet.

Copyright © cutey ... [ 2003-03-21 01:05:00]
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Re: Young (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 09:51:46 AM AEST
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I like it but I think the last line spoilt it. Just my opinion though.

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Re: Young (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 01:47:06 AM AEST
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Hey This is Trisha and I like this. I feel the hurt in you. I think you may have a kid but maybe it's just the peom. I feel your pain and I feel you're in love

Re: Young (User Rating: 1 )
by Cutey on Tuesday, 8th April 2003 @ 02:22:46 AM AEST
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i thank you so very much for getting the time to read my poem and that you liked it and wanted to see it wish i did have a baby you know but i dont the love and falling on love is true on that part

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