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Soldiers marching, single file
Survival is the lasting purpose
The never-ending, gruelling trial

An insignificant microcosm
Specks of life shrunk out of view
A forgettable addition to creation
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A Bug’s Life

Contributed by jcvamp on Saturday, 15th November 2008 @ 04:25:38 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

The ant hill is alive with movement
Soldiers marching, single file
Survival is the lasting purpose
The never-ending, gruelling trial

An insignificant microcosm
Specks of life shrunk out of view
A forgettable addition to creation
Could these ants be me and you?

Copyright Â© jcvamp ... [ 2008-11-15 04:25:38]
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Re: A Bug’s Life (User Rating: 1 )
by gmcse8 on Saturday, 15th November 2008 @ 07:47:48 AM AEST
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Nice poem. Very easy to read, flowed nicely. I liked some of the phrasing especially the second and third lines of the second stanza. I think I will go and look at some of your other stuff.

Re: A Bug’s Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th November 2008 @ 11:48:30 AM AEST
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A captivating and interesting write. I like your last line. Quite compelling.

I find it an immensely intriguing happenstance to have read this and
know that besides man, ants are the only animals that wage war.

Good post!

~ Breezy

Re: A Bug’s Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 27th November 2008 @ 02:44:06 PM AEST
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An interesting write with great imagery... The last line really stood out for me...
Jenni

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