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Array ( [sid] => 146314 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Run [time] => 2008-11-13 23:15:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Run
By Jennifer Steinberg

Unsure of her surroundings
feeling so lost
she couldn't have stayed
afraid of the cost

running through the woods
running out of air
she thought she could escape it
those feelings quickly disappeared

she thought she saw him
watching from her side
she ran and ran
but he followed behind

she tripped and fell
falling to the ground
she saw her life flash before her
as she fell into hell [comments] => 3 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 13 [informant] => jenniferstein2006 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Run

Contributed by jenniferstein2006 on Thursday, 13th November 2008 @ 11:15:49 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Run
By Jennifer Steinberg

Unsure of her surroundings
feeling so lost
she couldn't have stayed
afraid of the cost

running through the woods
running out of air
she thought she could escape it
those feelings quickly disappeared

she thought she saw him
watching from her side
she ran and ran
but he followed behind

she tripped and fell
falling to the ground
she saw her life flash before her
as she fell into hell

Copyright © jenniferstein2006 ... [ 2008-11-13 23:15:49]
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Re: Run (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 14th November 2008 @ 10:24:55 AM AEST
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I like this. Good work

Re: Run (User Rating: 1 )
by Cathi on Thursday, 20th November 2008 @ 12:52:15 AM AEST
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I love the darkness and the doom. It is as if the runner understands that she cannot escape. The end is the same, regardless of how far or fast she runs. Eventually she will fall - and she does. I love the internal rhyming emphasis in the last line. Very nice!

Re: Run (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 01:02:05 AM AEST
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image filled excellent chilling write,

hugs n' love nessa

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