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Array ( [sid] => 146178 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tic Toc [time] => 2008-11-07 19:19:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Staring at the clock
tic...toc
The time never stops
tic...toc
Every second without you
Is a second overdue
We said our last words
'Cause you know how "I have to be heard"
I could have just let it go
Instead of tryin to run the show
Instead of tryin to sink so low
But no not me...Id rather stare at a clock
Our clock...tic toc
Every tic and every toc reminds me of what I havent got
TIME...no more time...no more us..no we
Just me...
I'd turn on the radio...
But it just reminds me of how I ***** up
Our song....I just wish it would shut up
The only music I hear...
is the tic and the toc
A song so clear
Makes my body endrure the words pain
I'd cry some more
But what for
I know you arent comin back...
You will hold your word to that
You were never one to break it
I havent ate it days...I just cant take it
Without you...my heart just cant make it
You always told me to smile...even if I gotta fake it
But why should I lie some more...I wont partake in it
Your gone...and I'm here
I thought the paint wouldnt last long...but that still is also here
I know I cant take it back
Time is permanent I know
All I can say is that ...
I am sorry I said goodbye...Cuz I'd give anything to be able to say "Hello"
So I'll lay in our bed...and I'll cry on your pillow once again
Knowing I'm not alright
Tic Toc....as I lay my head..."TIME LET ME FORGET!"...
But then Time whispers..."Not tonight"






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Tic Toc

Contributed by mscommunicati0n on Friday, 7th November 2008 @ 07:19:59 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Staring at the clock
tic...toc
The time never stops
tic...toc
Every second without you
Is a second overdue
We said our last words
'Cause you know how "I have to be heard"
I could have just let it go
Instead of tryin to run the show
Instead of tryin to sink so low
But no not me...Id rather stare at a clock
Our clock...tic toc
Every tic and every toc reminds me of what I havent got
TIME...no more time...no more us..no we
Just me...
I'd turn on the radio...
But it just reminds me of how I ***** up
Our song....I just wish it would shut up
The only music I hear...
is the tic and the toc
A song so clear
Makes my body endrure the words pain
I'd cry some more
But what for
I know you arent comin back...
You will hold your word to that
You were never one to break it
I havent ate it days...I just cant take it
Without you...my heart just cant make it
You always told me to smile...even if I gotta fake it
But why should I lie some more...I wont partake in it
Your gone...and I'm here
I thought the paint wouldnt last long...but that still is also here
I know I cant take it back
Time is permanent I know
All I can say is that ...
I am sorry I said goodbye...Cuz I'd give anything to be able to say "Hello"
So I'll lay in our bed...and I'll cry on your pillow once again
Knowing I'm not alright
Tic Toc....as I lay my head..."TIME LET ME FORGET!"...
But then Time whispers..."Not tonight"










Copyright © mscommunicati0n ... [ 2008-11-07 19:19:59]
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Re: Tic Toc (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Friday, 7th November 2008 @ 07:25:41 PM AEST
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Yep live in the now and don't wait for tomorrow. never judge for they too will judge. just love if you dare, saying sorry shows you care


Re: Tic Toc (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 7th November 2008 @ 09:37:36 PM AEST
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Welcome to our global family here at ypdc.
Awesome writing.
huggs, blessings,
emy




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