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Bitter-Sweetism
Contributed by
Steelers101
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Wednesday, 5th November 2008 @ 10:49:14 PM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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Behind those pearly whites and subtle smile.
Lies youth unseen to naked eyes.
Dancing in a forseen, entrancing style.
that beholds your keen disguise.
The repulsion produced from envious fears
Dampening my delerious heart.
Swallowing the power of blood and tears.
Tearing my ambitions apart.
They say that love is forever.
They say diamonds are too.
If I had but just one endevor.
I would spend eternity with you.
But eternity is never ending.
What problems could arise?
the road will be always bending.
but we will trek on through the cries.
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Steelers101
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Re: Bitter-Sweetism
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadwriter on
Thursday, 6th November 2008 @ 10:22:09 AM AEST (User
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Very strong piece. Well done. Excellent ending. Never stop moving.
Welcome to the site.
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Re: Bitter-Sweetism
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 6th November 2008 @ 01:28:45 PM AEST (User
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A deep and powerful write.. I loved the positive ending...
Welcome to YPDC.. hope to see more from you...
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