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Rewriting my history
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
on
Wednesday, 5th November 2008 @ 05:06:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i wish i can tear a page of my life
so maybe i can rewrite it
in my image
my version
so that everyone can see
what i see during my pain
my struggle
and my worries
this may be a forgotten poem
but hey
at least i said
what i wanted to say, and now i feel great
Copyright ©
PreciousKitten
... [
2008-11-05 17:06:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Rewriting my history
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 6th November 2008 @ 02:18:25 PM AEST (User
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I really love the concept in this poem.... Thanks for sharing it..
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Re: Rewriting my history
(User Rating: 1 ) by outlawpoet on
Thursday, 6th November 2008 @ 02:21:48 PM AEST (User
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as long as you said what you needed and it made you feel good thats what counts good write |
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Re: Rewriting my history
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 02:46:09 AM AEST (User
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Yeah, what Jenni said. :-) Definitely like the conecpt and idea.
Tim |
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